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Array ( [sid] => 70463 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just a cute, happy, little girl??? [time] => 2004-11-07 06:05:11 [hometext] => Hmm...I wrote it cuz nobody seems to see me the way I really am...it's also a angry poetry. I don't like it but I decide to put it in here, so it is gone from my heart. [bodytext] => So that's what You see?
And You think that's me?

Wake up!
Open your eyes!

Do You don't see my pain?
Do you don't see my tears?

Or do You run away?
Have fear to look deeper
Have fear to be honest
Have fear to fall

Fall cuz my heart is open
And You could see the ground

You always want me close
You always need my hug
You always want to see my laugh
You always need my atention

But You just take
Take my last power

And wahst's with me?

I'LL FALL
and You'll look away

My heart always will be broken
Nothing left to say........ [comments] => 1 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Socke [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Just a cute, happy, little girl???

Contributed by Socke on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 06:05:11 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

So that's what You see?
And You think that's me?

Wake up!
Open your eyes!

Do You don't see my pain?
Do you don't see my tears?

Or do You run away?
Have fear to look deeper
Have fear to be honest
Have fear to fall

Fall cuz my heart is open
And You could see the ground

You always want me close
You always need my hug
You always want to see my laugh
You always need my atention

But You just take
Take my last power

And wahst's with me?

I'LL FALL
and You'll look away

My heart always will be broken
Nothing left to say........

Copyright © Socke ... [ 2004-11-07 06:05:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Just a cute, happy, little girl??? (User Rating: 1 )
by Mikki on Saturday, 10th December 2011 @ 04:48:47 PM AEST
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Phenomenal. I think a lot of people can relate to this, which is really important in poetry. :)
But hey, don't feel so down! Sometimes we feel like we're in the shadows when, in reality, we're just refusing to go in the light.
Great poem!!!! You've got real talent. :)

~ Mikki

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