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Contributed by
frozensuicide
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Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 01:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Blundering seasons past through the night.
Because of you I am alive.
You saved my life and took me from the light.
You held me close and let me reach the thrive.
Knowing that you didnt remember.
I was afraid.
Made me wonder about each other.
But I have to be brave.
At night I sat and thought.
With a blade so deep.
Blood fell from my flesh those nights of the fought.
Falling down in my hole to creep.
Dont please drop.
Just get better and come back to me
And I will never let your love stop.
Because we miss you if you cant see.
Pain from my arms I shake.
Wondering if ill ever see you again.
The cold demeanor of falling to the break.
The link to the end.
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2002-11-20 01:20:00]
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Re: You
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by Daniel on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:05:09 AM AEST
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| interesting write, i dunno whether to think this is creepy or beautiful... but thanks fer sharing it!! kudos! ;0) -daniel |
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Re: You
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 11:50:19 AM AEST
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This is beautiful, you write good
poetry stories, i really liked this one
it was hard to take my eyes off of it
Thanks for sharing this one
Keep em' coming
.::��`�..� OreO�..���`::. |
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