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Array ( [sid] => 70502 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Eyes Fallin' On Me [time] => 2004-11-07 13:14:26 [hometext] => I wrote this poem about a guy I like who I wish liked me back [bodytext] => Every day I walk around
In these same school hallways
Just tryin’, just tryin’
To get you to notice me
Hoping that one day
I’ll find your eyes locked on mine

Every night I fall asleep
And dream, oh I dream
That maybe someday
Your bright blue eyes
Will be on me

Maybe today
Will be the day
That you see my face
Or hear my voice
And realize that you can’t stop
Your eyes from fallin’ on me
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 33 [informant] => llamaluver [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 16 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Eyes Fallin' On Me

Contributed by llamaluver on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 01:14:26 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Every day I walk around
In these same school hallways
Just tryin’, just tryin’
To get you to notice me
Hoping that one day
I’ll find your eyes locked on mine

Every night I fall asleep
And dream, oh I dream
That maybe someday
Your bright blue eyes
Will be on me

Maybe today
Will be the day
That you see my face
Or hear my voice
And realize that you can’t stop
Your eyes from fallin’ on me

Copyright Â© llamaluver ... [ 2004-11-07 13:14:26]
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Re: Eyes Fallin' On Me (User Rating: 1 )
by New_York_Chick on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 01:27:44 PM AEST
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this sounds like a song, it's very pretty
good luck with ur crush

Re: Eyes Fallin' On Me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 01:36:46 PM AEST
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aww this is sweet and cute, I remember having crushs in school and everytime my crush walked past I would get butterflies in my stomach lol
maybe you should tell him?
takecare,
pixie xx

Re: Eyes Fallin' On Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 12:44:48 AM AEST
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I can relate to this so very very well, I know exactly what you are going through !! this is a good poem I enjoyed reading well hopefully in the end you will get the person ya want lol !! Good Luck I hope it all works !!

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