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Array ( [sid] => 7056 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => EVENING SADNESS [time] => 2002-11-20 03:40:00 [hometext] => "In an ocean of misery there is always hope!"
by Ryan Stephen Chandler [bodytext] => With eyes of gold,
And arms that long to hold,
She yearns.

With feet as swift,
And lips that wish to kiss,
She dreams.

She hates her life,
But longs to be a wife,
She cries.

With passion as her strength,
And power as her length,
She rises.

With no memory of her past,
Her days no longer last,
She dies.

With heaven at her door,
Pain and hatred is no more,
She smiles. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 14 [informant] => Ryanchandler [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )
EVENING SADNESS

Contributed by Ryanchandler on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes



With eyes of gold,
And arms that long to hold,
She yearns.

With feet as swift,
And lips that wish to kiss,
She dreams.

She hates her life,
But longs to be a wife,
She cries.

With passion as her strength,
And power as her length,
She rises.

With no memory of her past,
Her days no longer last,
She dies.

With heaven at her door,
Pain and hatred is no more,
She smiles.




Copyright © Ryanchandler ... [ 2002-11-20 03:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: EVENING SADNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 03:50:10 AM AEST
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AAAWWW how sad & sweet I loved this short poem,it touches you! Christina


Re: EVENING SADNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 07:40:17 AM AEST
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wow, touhing strong write you have hear, very beautiful!! kudos! ;0) -daniel


Re: EVENING SADNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 12:14:02 PM AEST
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"Masterpiece" that's what this is
This is so beautiful, it brought tears
to my eyes..Thanks for sharing it
I like the author's note you put up
at the top to where it says...In an
ocean of misery there is always
hope...and then you end it with
death and a smile, that's a very
creative talented way to write such
beautiful poetry, Bravo!
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: EVENING SADNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 02:33:50 AM AEST
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i really enjoyed this poem. the one stanza that i thought was sorta cliche was "she hates her life, / but longs to be a wife, / she cries." but eventually i forgot about that with the following stanzas being so powerful..

great job.

-sean


Re: EVENING SADNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by Ryanchandler on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 05:54:17 AM AEST
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Thanks


Re: EVENING SADNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by Ryanchandler on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 05:55:12 AM AEST
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Thank you!


Re: EVENING SADNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by Ryanchandler on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 05:56:01 AM AEST
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Thank you!


Re: EVENING SADNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by Ryanchandler on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 05:57:09 AM AEST
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Thank you!


Re: EVENING SADNESS (User Rating: 1 )
by Ryanchandler on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 05:57:40 AM AEST
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Thank you!




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