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Array ( [sid] => 70567 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Grab another cold one [time] => 2004-11-07 21:16:29 [hometext] => Mostly Sarcasm. [bodytext] => Go grab another cold one mom,
Theres still 4 left in the 12-pack you bought earlier today
Dont worry about feeding me, i`ll be alright.

Go grab another cold one mom,
Dont worry, my friends wont snicker.
They wont all gossip about you when they're gone.

Go grab another cold one mom,
You dont have to do anything for me tonight,
I'll just sit at the computer like i always do.

Go grab another cold one mom,
And have fun laughing with your drunken friends,
Your not making a fool out of yourself!

Go grab another cold one mom,
And dont worry about what im up to,
Im just cutting my wrists alone in my room, its all okay!

Go grab another cold one mom,
I`ll be okay, Really!
Your not being selfish at all!

Go grab another cold one mom,
Dont worry about the expenses,
We dont have to make ends meet as long as you have your beer!

Go grap another cold one mom,
Its really the right thing to do,
Go ahead, Drink yourself away. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 48 [informant] => EVERxSOxSWEET [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Grab another cold one

Contributed by EVERxSOxSWEET on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:16:29 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Go grab another cold one mom,
Theres still 4 left in the 12-pack you bought earlier today
Dont worry about feeding me, i`ll be alright.

Go grab another cold one mom,
Dont worry, my friends wont snicker.
They wont all gossip about you when they're gone.

Go grab another cold one mom,
You dont have to do anything for me tonight,
I'll just sit at the computer like i always do.

Go grab another cold one mom,
And have fun laughing with your drunken friends,
Your not making a fool out of yourself!

Go grab another cold one mom,
And dont worry about what im up to,
Im just cutting my wrists alone in my room, its all okay!

Go grab another cold one mom,
I`ll be okay, Really!
Your not being selfish at all!

Go grab another cold one mom,
Dont worry about the expenses,
We dont have to make ends meet as long as you have your beer!

Go grap another cold one mom,
Its really the right thing to do,
Go ahead, Drink yourself away.

Copyright © EVERxSOxSWEET ... [ 2004-11-07 21:16:29]
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Re: Grab another cold one (User Rating: 1 )
by EVERxSOxSWEET on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:18:56 PM AEST
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I meant to put this poem under 'sarcastic poems' Sorry.

Re: Grab another cold one (User Rating: 1 )
by Rous on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 09:23:07 PM AEST
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Emotional sounds about right. This is very angry. I am sorry that you feel this way. I cannot imagine my life if my mom had been like this. She was a good friend and very supportive of me. I believe it would have been the grossest betrayal had she been uncaring and selfish.

Re: Grab another cold one (User Rating: 1 )
by TedHuggableBare on Sunday, 7th November 2004 @ 10:28:59 PM AEST
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Life can be so unpredictable with the circumstances we all have to live with. You can do one of two things from the example you have been given; you can choose to mimic the pattern your mom is displaying or choose to set a new pattern by not drinking in front of your children when you start a family (this is assuming you have not started one since I don't know anything about you but what is in the poem). Both my parents are divorced and have been for some time. They both smoke like freight trains and I don't smoke at all. I tried it when I was younger and didn't even like it then. I am proud to say that I didn't follow in their footsteps with smoking. I hope and wish you the best.

Re: Grab another cold one (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 02:15:02 AM AEST
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awesome

Re: Grab another cold one (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 02:57:41 PM AEST
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The layout is good, not a nice topic

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