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Array ( [sid] => 7065 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => °°°Love's Gentle Breeze°°° [time] => 2002-11-20 06:40:00 [hometext] => Just an old poem of mine i dug up and re wrote.... [bodytext] => Wind blowing softly, a breeze gently came
We found in eachother that we are the same
You full of pride, hope and anger and pain
Both our hearts hurting one in the same
°°°
Hearts crying like the ocean's in a desperate rage
So locked up inside, our hearts were caged
Whispering softly, the wind couldnt hear
The way our lips dance, and hide from the tears
°°°
I've stood beside you through thick and thin
I cherish our true love, It's not a sin
Our love's survived so many things we've seen
This is our reality babe, it's far from a dream
°°°
To grow old with you i will live my life for
So happy and content, for eternity and more
Our never ending love abides in you and me
Our dreams can come true, can't you see
°°°
Soft as a rose, yet strong as thunder
Our true love abides, we'll never fall under
I love your blue eyes how they make love to my soul
Baby i'll always love you, this you already know
°°°
I'll never let you go, never let you out of sight
Everything with me and you it feels so right
Wind blowing softly, gentle as a breeze
Surviving everlasting love, is ours to keep
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°°°Love's Gentle Breeze°°°

Contributed by OreO on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 06:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Wind blowing softly, a breeze gently came
We found in eachother that we are the same
You full of pride, hope and anger and pain
Both our hearts hurting one in the same
°°°
Hearts crying like the ocean's in a desperate rage
So locked up inside, our hearts were caged
Whispering softly, the wind couldnt hear
The way our lips dance, and hide from the tears
°°°
I've stood beside you through thick and thin
I cherish our true love, It's not a sin
Our love's survived so many things we've seen
This is our reality babe, it's far from a dream
°°°
To grow old with you i will live my life for
So happy and content, for eternity and more
Our never ending love abides in you and me
Our dreams can come true, can't you see
°°°
Soft as a rose, yet strong as thunder
Our true love abides, we'll never fall under
I love your blue eyes how they make love to my soul
Baby i'll always love you, this you already know
°°°
I'll never let you go, never let you out of sight
Everything with me and you it feels so right
Wind blowing softly, gentle as a breeze
Surviving everlasting love, is ours to keep




Copyright © OreO ... [ 2002-11-20 06:40:00]
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Re: °°°Love's Gentle Breeze°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Baby_Blu-XTC on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 06:52:53 AM AEST
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wow,I can't believe I the privilege to be the first person to comment this poem.This was so amazingly written,u r such a great writer.


Re: °°°Love's Gentle Breeze°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Baby_Blu-XTC on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 06:53:02 AM AEST
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wow,I can't believe I the privilege to be the first person to comment this poem.This was so amazingly written,u r such a great writer.


Re: °°°Love's Gentle Breeze°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 06:56:09 AM AEST
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Oreo this is such a beautiful poem,As always youve done it again!Great write! Christina


Re: °°°Love's Gentle Breeze°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by WordPoet on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 07:12:16 AM AEST
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The depth of emotion portrayed with such eloquence and style has left me yearning for an existance such as this. May joy forever fill your cup and love your house.

Doug


Re: °°°Love's Gentle Breeze°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 07:18:59 AM AEST
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Oreo..this is a beauty!! Lovely poem.... Glad you posted it...
Jenni


Re: °°°Love's Gentle Breeze°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 04:49:16 PM AEST
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Great poem, pal! :-)


Re: °°°Love's Gentle Breeze°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Fwog on Wednesday, 20th November 2002 @ 07:28:55 PM AEST
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Hi OreO,
You have such a beautiful heart my dear friend and just like Jenni you are such a wordsmith.
I love your poetry and your optimism and get such pleasure from reading you. You strengthen me.
Hugz,
Fwog


Re: °°°Love's Gentle Breeze°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Metalmouth666 on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 01:45:51 PM AEST
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Hay OreO~
You never seem to stop amazing me with the writes KEEP IT UP!!!
~MetalMouth666


Re: °°°Love's Gentle Breeze°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 06:02:15 AM AEST
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All of what they said and then some....another work of genius. :o) Larry


Re: °°°Love's Gentle Breeze°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarah22 on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 01:03:19 AM AEST
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wow your poems a
re so very beautiful
to read i enjoy reading
them peace for now :*).


Re: °°°Love's Gentle Breeze°°° (User Rating: 1 )
by nomad on Saturday, 18th January 2003 @ 10:32:15 AM AEST
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Beautiful, OreO. This piece is so romantic, so intimate, so sweet, so loving. A warm and wonderful read.




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