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[aid] => mick
[title] => Why
[time] => 2004-11-08 19:22:04
[hometext] => I thought of the first lines in my 7th grade ELA class We had to do this thing called Show Don't Tell and I had to show upset. I am 14 and Have been writing for a year I have been told I am pretty good but I want to know from the people that don't know me
[bodytext] => Crying, Sobbing, Laying face down on my bed, My head drove into my pillow, Trying to drown out the sound of my own cries. Not wanting anyone to hear me, Not even myself, Waiting, Wondering, When shall the last tear fall, Hoping that this will be over soon, That I won't have to deal with this much longer. Red cheeked, Running nose, Light streams running down my face, Hoping for the best, Thinking of the worst, Why do I have to go through this? When shall it be over or shall I make it over. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 61 [informant] => BrookeStar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
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