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Array ( [sid] => 70700 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Vibrations of You [time] => 2004-11-08 20:58:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Chaos internal bleeds by staying harmless
not like I can,
I umbrella my head from the rest of the world
for the dreams of this man
that feel too good to be true.
It's like my life is the comic strip we all keep
coming back to...

I feel weak not sometimes -
waning, unrelaxing, resigning...
So dutiful a sunshine mirage
is about as real as I get,
if I dig deep and let sometimes forget.

Going under waves of not faults in your fluidity,
I slide against this cardinal moment, try to climb behind
your lines to claim my place.
I imagine the boundaries laced through your face.

Your tendencies try to leave something clear,
You are a fantasy
that lingers rhythm here.
I die to think of me an ordinary girl
with whom out isn't through...
Suitable like a stepladder for glimpsing a better look
At the things that were you.

No ugliness or flaw,
no weapon to use to defer you at all.
I want to survive you
and rest at the depth of
immortal love
too true for death.
Too blank, too sexless, faceless, hopeless, I trace
a dotted line carefully painted in clues
Obeying enormously the vibrations of you...
[comments] => 6 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Red_October [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Vibrations of You

Contributed by Red_October on Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 08:58:37 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Chaos internal bleeds by staying harmless
not like I can,
I umbrella my head from the rest of the world
for the dreams of this man
that feel too good to be true.
It's like my life is the comic strip we all keep
coming back to...

I feel weak not sometimes -
waning, unrelaxing, resigning...
So dutiful a sunshine mirage
is about as real as I get,
if I dig deep and let sometimes forget.

Going under waves of not faults in your fluidity,
I slide against this cardinal moment, try to climb behind
your lines to claim my place.
I imagine the boundaries laced through your face.

Your tendencies try to leave something clear,
You are a fantasy
that lingers rhythm here.
I die to think of me an ordinary girl
with whom out isn't through...
Suitable like a stepladder for glimpsing a better look
At the things that were you.

No ugliness or flaw,
no weapon to use to defer you at all.
I want to survive you
and rest at the depth of
immortal love
too true for death.
Too blank, too sexless, faceless, hopeless, I trace
a dotted line carefully painted in clues
Obeying enormously the vibrations of you...




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Re: Vibrations of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 06:23:29 AM AEST
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Vivid and intense, painting deep visuals and screaming emotions, awesome poem. very graphic and deep totally cool poem, glad I had a read.


Re: Vibrations of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 07:43:46 AM AEST
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Wow! That was hot! I loved the imagery. It was so excellant. It gave me the chills, seriously! Great write!!!!! I am going to go read it again! Ok I loved it even more the second time. I love every stanza and everyline! Way cool! Very very deep!


Re: Vibrations of You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 08:58:38 AM AEST
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such a lovely write, great use of emotions,

takecare,
pixie xx


Re: Vibrations of You (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:37:33 PM AEST
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you are my fantasy that lingers rhythm here.....this touched feelings in me....reminded me of feelings i have for him......mmmmm


Re: Vibrations of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Aquaelius on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:08:57 PM AEST
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The imagery was intense, I loved it... very good write.

Aq.


Re: Vibrations of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Nomie on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 04:23:38 AM AEST
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i just clicked the mystery button and it brought me to ur poem! And i am so glad it did! That was absolutely beautiful!




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