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Beaten!
Contributed by
givingin
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Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 12:25:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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BEATEN
The feeling of his fist,
against my battered face,
this life is my only one,
this is my only place.
He calls me names when he gets home,
because the dishes were not done,
he hits me once and then again,
and all I feel is shun.
My mother sits in the chair,
as she watches him have his way,
I know she cares but does not dare,
for she knows what he will say.
Sit down *****, leave us be,
or else you will get it too!
All she thinks of is poor me,
but oh my god poor you!
I lay here now, all motionless,
and do not speak a word,
I hear some footsteps coming close,
I think my father heard.
Tonight I called the only ones,
who could help me and my mom,
the sirens blast and flash so red,
I listen to there song.
My father runs and hits my mom,
he then gos to his desk,
he pulls a gun and cocks it,
then puts it to his chest.
My mother screams and runs to me,
her face is bruised and this I see.
The cars pull up and they come in,
Then take my mom away.
I watch a man as he approach,
he bends and looks at me,
he turns to mom,
Im sorry miss, but soon her life wont be.
She kneels down and kisses me,
I love you dear, Im so sorry!
I watch her fade as I close my eyes
and thank god for saving me.
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Re: Beaten!
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 12:43:25 PM AEST
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such a powerful sad write,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Beaten!
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by screwup on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:00:49 PM AEST
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I've been beaten all my life too... this is sure to be the anthem... good piece...
~Deanna |
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Re: Beaten!
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by kidpoet_213 on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 01:13:43 PM AEST
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Yes.. indeed a powerful... but sad write...
I'm not sure what to say...
U take care...
~Donna~ |
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Re: Beaten!
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by Deathly_Rose on
Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 02:26:41 PM AEST
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HEY! ^.^ I love this poem, I think that you did an awesome job on capturing the feeling of being beaten. You are my best friend, and I shall not let anybody hurt you like you wrote in the poem. Love you tonz! *kiss kiss*
-Alicia |
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Re: Beaten!
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by secretwind on
Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 12:02:15 PM AEST
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| DEEP INNERVISION,WELL WRITTEN. |
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