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hits me harder than the last
Each one that plays
reminds me of the past
So many relationships
that everyone thought would last

I haven't seen them all
in such a long time
but I remember each one
with every rhyme

I feel more pain
with each one I remember
I feel so cold
Like alaskan december

I bury my pain in the bottle
I take another draw from the bowl
With all my pains I wonder
"when will I be whole?"
How can I go on
living with an empty soul?

I go on living
I am an empty shell
This life of mine
is a perpetual hell

I lost my will to live
so long ago I can't remember when
all i have are my thoughts
playing over and over again

My body is dying now
I will never be whole
but how was I expected
to live with an empty soul? [comments] => 7 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 36 [informant] => crash [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 30 [ratings] => 6 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Empty Soul

Contributed by crash on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:37:13 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Each song on the radio
hits me harder than the last
Each one that plays
reminds me of the past
So many relationships
that everyone thought would last

I haven't seen them all
in such a long time
but I remember each one
with every rhyme

I feel more pain
with each one I remember
I feel so cold
Like alaskan december

I bury my pain in the bottle
I take another draw from the bowl
With all my pains I wonder
"when will I be whole?"
How can I go on
living with an empty soul?

I go on living
I am an empty shell
This life of mine
is a perpetual hell

I lost my will to live
so long ago I can't remember when
all i have are my thoughts
playing over and over again

My body is dying now
I will never be whole
but how was I expected
to live with an empty soul?

Copyright © crash ... [ 2004-11-09 16:37:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Empty Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by joe-joe on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:42:32 PM AEST
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I can remember very vividly when I was in this place that you write about, thought I would never survive but I did... very nice write, I can clearly see the picture...

Re: Empty Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by romayne on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:43:22 PM AEST
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Good Poem, but never give up on anything. Romayne

Re: Empty Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Irish on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 04:49:41 PM AEST
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Whoa... deep writing. I know what it's like to feel empty inside, it just kinda eats away at yeh. Good poem.

Re: Empty Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 05:01:34 PM AEST
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sounds a lot like what I'm going through... good write though sad.
~screwup

Re: Empty Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Tuesday, 9th November 2004 @ 11:13:14 PM AEST
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I loved this poem, it was awesome good job. It sounds just like me how i feel.

Re: Empty Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 08:04:26 AM AEST
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very deep and sad, please be strong,

takecare.
pixie xx

Re: Empty Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 09:28:18 AM AEST
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Love this poem. It's a masterpiece.. your poems are very good and I like reading them. This poem was very sad and depressing but very deep and emotional as well.. Bravo!!

~ :: christina :: ~

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