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Control
Contributed by
Satrianus
on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 07:39:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Feels like falling,
falling down from grace
Feels like crawling,
Crawling in a closed space
Hatred burning,
Burning like a flame
Feelings rising
Rising all to shame
Control the anger
Control the hate
Control the violence
Control your fate
Feels like dying
Dying in this place
Feels like crying
Crying in disgrace
Angry screaming
Screaming untill Im sore
Absorbing emotions
I cant take no more
Control the anger
Control the hate
Control the violence
Control your fate
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Satrianus
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2004-11-10 07:39:57]
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Re: Control
(User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 09:45:23 AM AEST
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strong poem with great meaning nicely done
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Re: Control
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 11:18:35 AM AEST
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in my opinion, it's a great poem that very powerfully written!
we all know what this feels like.
i love your work here! |
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