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Array ( [sid] => 70945 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tear Rimmed Eyes Lit by Moonlight [time] => 2004-11-10 13:37:49 [hometext] => this is about me and jake its metaphorical im the girl and jake is the moon [bodytext] => tear rimmed eyes lit by moonlight
the evening heavens boring down on her face
secrets leave her weeping
in her confined space

the moon speaks to her
while she waits silently and still
it reads into her soul
knows everything she came to feel

she falls to the ground
left in an unconcious state
her subconcious is spinning
awaiting her fate

the sleeping girl wakes
with tear rimmed eyes still lit by moonlight
hoping for a pull from her intuition
staring off into the night [comments] => 3 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 13 [informant] => brokensoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Tear Rimmed Eyes Lit by Moonlight

Contributed by brokensoul on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:37:49 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

tear rimmed eyes lit by moonlight
the evening heavens boring down on her face
secrets leave her weeping
in her confined space

the moon speaks to her
while she waits silently and still
it reads into her soul
knows everything she came to feel

she falls to the ground
left in an unconcious state
her subconcious is spinning
awaiting her fate

the sleeping girl wakes
with tear rimmed eyes still lit by moonlight
hoping for a pull from her intuition
staring off into the night

Copyright © brokensoul ... [ 2004-11-10 13:37:49]
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Re: Tear Rimmed Eyes Lit by Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 10th November 2004 @ 01:42:01 PM AEST
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a dark write, bey tinted with some beauty,

takecare,
pixie xx

Re: Tear Rimmed Eyes Lit by Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 15th February 2005 @ 07:21:47 AM AEST
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I admire the way you have disguised a person with something in which is abiotic... beautiful personification and symbolism.

Re: Tear Rimmed Eyes Lit by Moonlight (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 02:45:48 PM AEST
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very nice metaphor
it's dark, yes, but it's lovely

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