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Array ( [sid] => 71067 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Poem Of Sorrow Pt. 2 : There Is No God [time] => 2004-11-11 11:40:49 [hometext] => This poem can be very Offensive to many people. [bodytext] => The Poem Of Sorrow Pt. 2 : There Is No God

Does god exist? I don't think so,

If he did, he would've helped me years ago.

From the day I was born, my life has been cursed,

It's been miserable sense then and now it's been worst.

The pain in my inside burns like a flame,

It's all you fault and just him to blame.

He's the one who brought me here,

He's the reason why I shed tears.

Tonight it's my last, don't try to stop me,

It's not even worth it, when will he see?

God are you real or don't you care?

Think this next time, when you can't bare.

The blood on this blade, seems only to stare,

I still don't know why all He gives me is despair.

See what you've done? You're nothing, but failure.

God has nothing but delusions of grandeur.

So god do you see that I'm in pain?

Do you care about my sorrow? Do you see I'm insaine?

Forget you god! And every thing you've done!

After to night I'll never be stoped to have fun!

God will you stop me or will you just watch!?

You'll never care, to you I'm just a botch.

Have fun with you'r distruction, have fun with all the war,

Right now I don't give a *****, just continue to ignore.

So I guess this is the end, no more of my hollow death,

So now I say good by, thanks to you I'm out of breath.

--Evan L.--


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The Poem Of Sorrow Pt. 2 : There Is No God

Contributed by thepos on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:40:49 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



The Poem Of Sorrow Pt. 2 : There Is No God

Does god exist? I don't think so,

If he did, he would've helped me years ago.

From the day I was born, my life has been cursed,

It's been miserable sense then and now it's been worst.

The pain in my inside burns like a flame,

It's all you fault and just him to blame.

He's the one who brought me here,

He's the reason why I shed tears.

Tonight it's my last, don't try to stop me,

It's not even worth it, when will he see?

God are you real or don't you care?

Think this next time, when you can't bare.

The blood on this blade, seems only to stare,

I still don't know why all He gives me is despair.

See what you've done? You're nothing, but failure.

God has nothing but delusions of grandeur.

So god do you see that I'm in pain?

Do you care about my sorrow? Do you see I'm insaine?

Forget you god! And every thing you've done!

After to night I'll never be stoped to have fun!

God will you stop me or will you just watch!?

You'll never care, to you I'm just a botch.

Have fun with you'r distruction, have fun with all the war,

Right now I don't give a *****, just continue to ignore.

So I guess this is the end, no more of my hollow death,

So now I say good by, thanks to you I'm out of breath.

--Evan L.--


www.thepoemsofsorrow.com




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Re: The Poem Of Sorrow Pt. 2 : There Is No God (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 11:56:57 AM AEST
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There are times I felt this way. I wasn't always a Christian and even since, there were times I felt deserted. Then, I look back. I see how much worse things could have been, I see how He really did guide me through the rough spots, I see the people and events He allowed into my life and how He used them to help me grow. Knowing God doesn't mean your life will be perfect, it means you will ALWAYS have someone to turn to who will help you find the strength to get through.
Stitch




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