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Array ( [sid] => 71109 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Icy Razors Edge [time] => 2004-11-11 16:45:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A moment in time, a face frozen forever
Gone from this world, gone to the never
Never will it be back again
On this earth, which still shall spin
Going round and round every day
No one knowing
No one caring
That someone was alone enough
To want to end this hell
She took a blade and cut their skin
Breaking it again and again
Watching the blood as it circled down the drain
Swirling in a show of red
The water ran and washed it away
Before she began again
Eventually she couldn’t stop
It became a form of release

Of all the things that were crap in her life
Of love she’d never have
Or many things she’d always want
Of all those she’d never get
Of things she’d lost
Of everyone who’d hurt her
Of people who had scorned her

For things that she had never done
Because of painful lies
Those popular girls had said so many things
Had hurt her when her skin was raw
They turned their backs
And walked away
Leaving her in the hands of ice cold fate
She made her choice
And her blood kept pumping
Her heart slowing down
Her body thumping
On the cold bathroom floor
Where she lay for hours
Waiting for someone to find her
Her life force seeping out of her
With each ounce of spilled blood

It was hours later that she was finally found
Lying on the floor
Cold as ice
She no longer took breaths
Simply lay there, eyes glassed over and heart no longer beating
Because of cruel people she’d taken her own life
The girl had been so badly hurt
Her heart had become so torn
She decided to get away from the burning flames
So she took her life
With the icy razors edge
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The Icy Razors Edge

Contributed by butterbuns on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 04:45:35 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

A moment in time, a face frozen forever
Gone from this world, gone to the never
Never will it be back again
On this earth, which still shall spin
Going round and round every day
No one knowing
No one caring
That someone was alone enough
To want to end this hell
She took a blade and cut their skin
Breaking it again and again
Watching the blood as it circled down the drain
Swirling in a show of red
The water ran and washed it away
Before she began again
Eventually she couldn’t stop
It became a form of release

Of all the things that were crap in her life
Of love she’d never have
Or many things she’d always want
Of all those she’d never get
Of things she’d lost
Of everyone who’d hurt her
Of people who had scorned her

For things that she had never done
Because of painful lies
Those popular girls had said so many things
Had hurt her when her skin was raw
They turned their backs
And walked away
Leaving her in the hands of ice cold fate
She made her choice
And her blood kept pumping
Her heart slowing down
Her body thumping
On the cold bathroom floor
Where she lay for hours
Waiting for someone to find her
Her life force seeping out of her
With each ounce of spilled blood

It was hours later that she was finally found
Lying on the floor
Cold as ice
She no longer took breaths
Simply lay there, eyes glassed over and heart no longer beating
Because of cruel people she’d taken her own life
The girl had been so badly hurt
Her heart had become so torn
She decided to get away from the burning flames
So she took her life
With the icy razors edge

Copyright Â© butterbuns ... [ 2004-11-11 16:45:35]
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Re: The Icy Razors Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 04:50:24 PM AEST
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Powerful, very sad and painful to read. Emotion packed - wonderful poem!

Laurie

Re: The Icy Razors Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by Quilted_rag_doll on Thursday, 11th November 2004 @ 08:30:44 PM AEST
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*applauds* very good. i liked it alot. good use of words, awesome poem.

¤~::.. a n d e ..::~¤

Re: The Icy Razors Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:16:55 AM AEST
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good, but where you said "She took a blade and cut THEIR skin"
I believe you ment "HER skin"

but other than that one mistake, I enjoyed it.

Re: The Icy Razors Edge (User Rating: 1 )
by Deathly_Rose on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 05:44:32 PM AEST
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just another patheitc poem, by another pathetic person... Maybe you should learn to write ^.~ Buh bye

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