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Array ( [sid] => 7112 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => On The Verge [time] => 2002-11-21 00:20:00 [hometext] => why i like cutting myself..... but dont know why.... [bodytext] => I'm on the verge,
of soaking in my blood.
the cold temptation of suicide,
the blade and my wrist shall perge.

I have no idea whats happening to me.
the subtle exsistance of life no longer amuses me.
i cant figure why my desire to die is strong,
but inside and out its killing me.

I'm on the verge of death at my wings.
the sweet sensation of the burning in my arms.
a blade pressed against my flesh i gasp.
as the burning of passes embarks my body and sings.

Tears burn my eyes as i know whats happening.
my friends, i worry, what they truly think of me.
im more afraid of whats happening to me,
than they are realizing...

i cant stop myself from cutting.
im on the verge of suicide.
i cant stop my self from cutting,
i love the pain it brings like you just died.

im on the verge of suicide.
on the verge to leave.
on the verge of this not happening,
hoping i wont decieve. [comments] => 14 [counter] => 338 [topic] => 36 [informant] => frozensuicide [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
On The Verge

Contributed by frozensuicide on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 12:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I'm on the verge,
of soaking in my blood.
the cold temptation of suicide,
the blade and my wrist shall perge.

I have no idea whats happening to me.
the subtle exsistance of life no longer amuses me.
i cant figure why my desire to die is strong,
but inside and out its killing me.

I'm on the verge of death at my wings.
the sweet sensation of the burning in my arms.
a blade pressed against my flesh i gasp.
as the burning of passes embarks my body and sings.

Tears burn my eyes as i know whats happening.
my friends, i worry, what they truly think of me.
im more afraid of whats happening to me,
than they are realizing...

i cant stop myself from cutting.
im on the verge of suicide.
i cant stop my self from cutting,
i love the pain it brings like you just died.

im on the verge of suicide.
on the verge to leave.
on the verge of this not happening,
hoping i wont decieve.




Copyright © frozensuicide ... [ 2002-11-21 00:20:00]
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Re: On The Verge (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 12:24:01 AM AEST
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This is so sad I hope you get the help you need! Cutting yourself gains you power & I think thats why you do this! I wish hope for you soon! God bless,Christina


Re: On The Verge (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 12:26:20 AM AEST
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I can completely understand how
you feel here, i just hope your not
thinking of doing nothing real stupid
Thanks for sharing this one i've
been down this road more than i
care to remember and sometimes
it still creeps upon me like a thief.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: On The Verge (User Rating: 1 )
by Blue on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 01:01:28 AM AEST
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I know exactly how you feel....I've struggled with suicide all my life....

It's a hidden disease...sometimes it's so easy
just to give in

but if you ever need someone to talk to, I'm here for what it's worth as some one who knows.

Don't be afraid to share...

Blue


Re: On The Verge (User Rating: 1 )
by Rage on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 01:19:24 AM AEST
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Brilliant work here. Brings the pain out to the reader. Keep sharing.

Happier Dayz,
~*~RAGE~*~


Re: On The Verge (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetolbaby on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 02:51:46 AM AEST
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I remembered when i use to cut myself when i was angry, fustrated, or depressed but i quickly stopped. I guess me and you can relate very well. Good write and keep those poems coming!


Re: On The Verge (User Rating: 1 )
by Van on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 05:04:12 AM AEST
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Im a cutter too. I have been on the verge as you call it so many times. I still cut to this day. I have been a cutter since i was 13 and im now 18. I never understood the earge to do it. Writing about it helps me and i hope it helps you too. This was a great piece.
Dan


Re: On The Verge (User Rating: 1 )
by nightrider on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 06:12:29 AM AEST
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oh, i read this one at code today with you! i really like it! it is full of your emotion, and it takes the reader to your world. great write!


Re: On The Verge (User Rating: 1 )
by MnMnMsrcool on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 07:12:08 AM AEST
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This is a good poem...its sad though. i hope u find peace keep writing


Re: On The Verge (User Rating: 1 )
by Yellowrose on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 10:55:48 AM AEST
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A poem filled with SADNESS and PAIN An EXCEPTIONAL write.

Best of luck! Yellowrose


Re: On The Verge (User Rating: 1 )
by Chicken on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 11:34:33 AM AEST
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Cutting gives you a release, but the price outweighs the satisfaction....may God give you the strength to overcome


Re: On The Verge (User Rating: 1 )
by adsalamon on Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 06:59:54 PM AEST
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good poem. Ive been through a cutting stage in my life not long ago. i dunno why i did it, just made me feel better..
thanks



Re: On The Verge (User Rating: 1 )
by Sandra on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 01:34:38 AM AEST
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Its scarry how truthful that is, I sadly to say know it from some experince. I to miss the feeling of the cutting. But believe me, it is possible to control it or even maybe stop.


Re: On The Verge (User Rating: 1 )
by bopeep on Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 04:46:31 PM AEST
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good poem, sad story. seems like you've spoken the words that many can relate to. sadly, i can too. Cutting can give you a high, seeing the blood run down is like letting all that negativity flow out as well. You kill yourself for just awhile, but soon you come back. Although i can't stop, please find it within yourself to do so. Life is precious, life is all we have. Nothing said or done upon you should make you feel as if you have nothing else to live for. Peace out


Re: On The Verge (User Rating: 1 )
by POETRY_AND_LOVE_BUG on Wednesday, 4th December 2002 @ 08:30:07 PM AEST
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IT'S REALLY GOOD NUT I AM IN A THOUGHT THAT YOU ARE REALLY READY TO DO THIS AND I HOPE YOU DON'T TOO GOOD OF A WRITER TO KILL YOURSELF!!!!!!!!!!!




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