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Array ( [sid] => 71189 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rotten Kovered [time] => 2004-11-12 07:13:28 [hometext] => A poem i wrote for my mate's koursework on diskrimination against weight. [bodytext] => Dispirited
I feel dispirited this lonely morning
Afrightened to leave this house, my tomb
For your words are like dripping poison
That get trapt in my blood streem
Killing me softly, killing me deadly
For your looks are like burning acid
Korrupting my life & melting me away
Not that you sympathise, not that you kare
Not that you want to…
Damaged
I feel damaged like your broken doll
There to be laughed at, to be pointed at
Stikk pins in, when there nothing else to do
Its not like I kan stop you
I’m to terrified to say stop
So I’ll just safety pin my mouth shut
Melancholy
I feel melancholy every time I stand on the skales
My worst nightmare under my feet
Maybe if I sew my eyes shut & believe that much
The pointer will move bakk to show me a perfekt 10
But its all pessimistik lies
Detest
I feel detest as I follow the lines of strawberry surprises
Into my dreem’s where I’m beautiful
& fine drawn
Where I’m pretty, walking down the kat walk
& your down there looking up at me
But that will never happen
I always wake up to reality where I’m under your shoe
Vindikated
I feel vindikated as you will never realise
That I’m rotten on the outside
Peel away the shell
& I’m kandy on the inside
Just like you… [comments] => 1 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Kreeping_Beauty [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Rotten Kovered

Contributed by Kreeping_Beauty on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 07:13:28 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Dispirited
I feel dispirited this lonely morning
Afrightened to leave this house, my tomb
For your words are like dripping poison
That get trapt in my blood streem
Killing me softly, killing me deadly
For your looks are like burning acid
Korrupting my life & melting me away
Not that you sympathise, not that you kare
Not that you want to…
Damaged
I feel damaged like your broken doll
There to be laughed at, to be pointed at
Stikk pins in, when there nothing else to do
Its not like I kan stop you
I’m to terrified to say stop
So I’ll just safety pin my mouth shut
Melancholy
I feel melancholy every time I stand on the skales
My worst nightmare under my feet
Maybe if I sew my eyes shut & believe that much
The pointer will move bakk to show me a perfekt 10
But its all pessimistik lies
Detest
I feel detest as I follow the lines of strawberry surprises
Into my dreem’s where I’m beautiful
& fine drawn
Where I’m pretty, walking down the kat walk
& your down there looking up at me
But that will never happen
I always wake up to reality where I’m under your shoe
Vindikated
I feel vindikated as you will never realise
That I’m rotten on the outside
Peel away the shell
& I’m kandy on the inside
Just like you…




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Re: Rotten Kovered (User Rating: 1 )
by persia on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:06:09 AM AEST
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gd poem! people need to get ova da physical and concentrate on da import stuff!

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