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Array ( [sid] => 71206 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Crimson Blood [time] => 2004-11-12 10:32:01 [hometext] => Kind of short, but I wrote it in class just started jotting so.... [bodytext] =>
Let my blood escape the veins.
Release all my demons, and my inner pains.
The tearing of the skin, from a brand new blade.
Delicate skin being wasted away.
Crimson blood drips down my arm, onto the floor.
I show no emotion as I stand there and bleed.
Because this is what I have wanted for eternity.
My life is dripping down my arm onto the dirty floor, as where I soon shall lay.
This is the price you pay for being like me...
A broken smile I cast, but no one knows anything of my past.
A perfect daughter indeed, little do they know that my knife has taken over me... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 36 [informant] => addicted2selfharm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Crimson Blood

Contributed by addicted2selfharm on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:32:01 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Let my blood escape the veins.
Release all my demons, and my inner pains.
The tearing of the skin, from a brand new blade.
Delicate skin being wasted away.
Crimson blood drips down my arm, onto the floor.
I show no emotion as I stand there and bleed.
Because this is what I have wanted for eternity.
My life is dripping down my arm onto the dirty floor, as where I soon shall lay.
This is the price you pay for being like me...
A broken smile I cast, but no one knows anything of my past.
A perfect daughter indeed, little do they know that my knife has taken over me...

Copyright © addicted2selfharm ... [ 2004-11-12 10:32:01]
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Re: Crimson Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:34:40 AM AEST
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another sad, disturbing and powerful poem,

pixie xx

Re: Crimson Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by shena_bean on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 10:56:12 AM AEST
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i really like this...i can kind of relate to it...

Re: Crimson Blood (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 09:51:26 PM AEST
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brilliant poem. powerful and emotional. written very well. presented with excellence. you deserve to be commended on for this poem.

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