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Array ( [sid] => 71209 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Make My Blood Run Cold [time] => 2004-11-12 11:20:37 [hometext] => just a little poem about myself [bodytext] => You really so make my blood run cold,
Down the stream of insanity you have been sold,
The sick things that you do day after day,
Make my stomach churn I don’t know what to say.

What made you the way that you are?
I know your soul carries an eternal scar,
I know you have stared into the face of death,
For so long wanted to take your last breath.

You have hated everyone who has entered your life,
Flirted like mad with the edge of a knife,
You have laughed in the face of so much danger,
Hated your mother for being a stranger.

The only person that I have ever feared is you,
Because I have seen just what you can do,
I have seen the way your mind just flips,
Away from reality & sanity you can slip.

You always thought that rape was your fault,
Didn’t like the hand you’d been dealt,
There are so many things that make me cringe,
Show to me that you are totally unhinged.

My blood runs cold when I see your face,
I see all your rage that you have misplaced,
Over the years you have created so much pain,
The reason you scare me is because I think you’re insane
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You Make My Blood Run Cold

Contributed by pixie on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:20:37 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



You really so make my blood run cold,
Down the stream of insanity you have been sold,
The sick things that you do day after day,
Make my stomach churn I don’t know what to say.

What made you the way that you are?
I know your soul carries an eternal scar,
I know you have stared into the face of death,
For so long wanted to take your last breath.

You have hated everyone who has entered your life,
Flirted like mad with the edge of a knife,
You have laughed in the face of so much danger,
Hated your mother for being a stranger.

The only person that I have ever feared is you,
Because I have seen just what you can do,
I have seen the way your mind just flips,
Away from reality & sanity you can slip.

You always thought that rape was your fault,
Didn’t like the hand you’d been dealt,
There are so many things that make me cringe,
Show to me that you are totally unhinged.

My blood runs cold when I see your face,
I see all your rage that you have misplaced,
Over the years you have created so much pain,
The reason you scare me is because I think you’re insane




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Re: You Make My Blood Run Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Corona on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:24:32 AM AEST
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This is soooo great!! Good wrtiting!!


Re: You Make My Blood Run Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:34:54 AM AEST
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an emotional and powerful write. well done.

Johnny.


Re: You Make My Blood Run Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 11:45:44 AM AEST
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i believe all of us feel like this at one time or another, like a subliminal convo with our own madness, this is the best poem i ever read under this topic, so human, deeply powerfully written, hugs n' love nessa

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Re: You Make My Blood Run Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 12:01:06 PM AEST
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wow pixie, that was a great write!
I feel your pain sometimes.
When I read your poems they always hit the heart.
Well done!
*~givingin~*


Re: You Make My Blood Run Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 04:19:17 PM AEST
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I felt this one so much, maybe its because i had an internal fight with myself earlier......

This is a great poem though the content may be considered a little strange but i love it!

take care of yourself

Gen xx


Re: You Make My Blood Run Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by inoc on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 06:00:28 AM AEST
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It is good that you can release all those feelings in poem form...
it probably helps you
remember
God Loves You
but I guess you know that?
I can't speak for everyone but I think the majority of people do think you are GREAT
[I can tell by all the reads you get and the comments and most of all how terrific you are at commenting on others,,,thanks Pixie]
cheers!~ PIXIExoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo




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