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Array ( [sid] => 71220 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My thought's, my life [time] => 2004-11-12 13:08:49 [hometext] => how I feel [bodytext] => My Thoughts, My Life

Dazed and confused,
of this world that I’m in,
loved and abused,
in this world full of sin.

Now as you read this,
I want you to know,
that these are my thoughts,
that I can now show.

Sometimes bewildered,
just thinking” not right”,
I watch on the news,
as they kill and they fight.

Sometimes at home,
I sit and I cry,
watching my life,
as it passes me by.

Hoping you’re there,
to whisk me away,
I pray you return,
if just for one day.

The place that I live,
is a druggy old town,
though I still do good,
I still feel down.

I may do some things,
illegal and wrong,
but I’m still a good person,
and I still stand strong.

Some people may love me,
and some people may hate,
I still do my best,
cause in the end it’s too late.

I know there is hate,
I know people fight,
but they can be saved,
if they com into the light.

Is there really a god,?
this I don’t know,
is the devil for real?
or are they just for show.

So be brave for yourself,
don’t let life fade away,
continue to fight,
for you shall win some day. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 21 [informant] => givingin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

My thought's, my life

Contributed by givingin on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 01:08:49 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

My Thoughts, My Life

Dazed and confused,
of this world that I’m in,
loved and abused,
in this world full of sin.

Now as you read this,
I want you to know,
that these are my thoughts,
that I can now show.

Sometimes bewildered,
just thinking” not right”,
I watch on the news,
as they kill and they fight.

Sometimes at home,
I sit and I cry,
watching my life,
as it passes me by.

Hoping you’re there,
to whisk me away,
I pray you return,
if just for one day.

The place that I live,
is a druggy old town,
though I still do good,
I still feel down.

I may do some things,
illegal and wrong,
but I’m still a good person,
and I still stand strong.

Some people may love me,
and some people may hate,
I still do my best,
cause in the end it’s too late.

I know there is hate,
I know people fight,
but they can be saved,
if they com into the light.

Is there really a god,?
this I don’t know,
is the devil for real?
or are they just for show.

So be brave for yourself,
don’t let life fade away,
continue to fight,
for you shall win some day.

Copyright © givingin ... [ 2004-11-12 13:08:49]
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Re: My thought's, my life (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 01:19:50 PM AEST
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good write, flow was spot on and it kept me intrested right til the end,

takecare,
pixie xx

Re: My thought's, my life (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 02:23:22 PM AEST
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interesting write bro...

please comment on my work too
summer

Re: My thought's, my life (User Rating: 1 )
by Evilnn on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 05:45:12 PM AEST
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Great write
I really liked this poem

Re: My thought's, my life (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 06:21:49 PM AEST
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givingin

Confused--naw your just normal.This poem speaks a lot of you and I believe there is a God and that He allows us to doubt and question Him.I do suggest you pray God lead me where You want me to be and I think He will. We are all spcial to Him.

Sinned

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