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Array ( [sid] => 71224 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Decending precious one [time] => 2004-11-12 13:52:37 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm bleeding from the fartherest deeps of my black heart,
Bleeding tears of pain for a reason long forgotten.
But I pain still scared so deep into me.
Self inflictions numb the pain, make it worse, maybe take my life.
I'm desperate to find a quick fix,
A small amount of pain,
A reason to go to sleep at night,
For a reason to wake up in the morning.
You tell me that it will pass, but it's not going to be ok.
I just don't want it to end like this,
I don't want the reason of my death to be getting back at you.
But the reason for my pain is not having you,
You not having me... wanting me... ignore me.
Hope is distant and a weakness...
The future is over.
And I decend into depression once again. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 13 [informant] => surge_joebot [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Decending precious one

Contributed by surge_joebot on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 01:52:37 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'm bleeding from the fartherest deeps of my black heart,
Bleeding tears of pain for a reason long forgotten.
But I pain still scared so deep into me.
Self inflictions numb the pain, make it worse, maybe take my life.
I'm desperate to find a quick fix,
A small amount of pain,
A reason to go to sleep at night,
For a reason to wake up in the morning.
You tell me that it will pass, but it's not going to be ok.
I just don't want it to end like this,
I don't want the reason of my death to be getting back at you.
But the reason for my pain is not having you,
You not having me... wanting me... ignore me.
Hope is distant and a weakness...
The future is over.
And I decend into depression once again.

Copyright © surge_joebot ... [ 2004-11-12 13:52:37]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Decending precious one (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 02:06:14 PM AEST
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Deep thoughts within your write."You tell me that it will pass" May we all find the light some day. Untill then we must write to ease this pain we call life.

~~DENNIS~~

Re: Decending precious one (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 02:17:04 PM AEST
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"Bleeding tears of pain for a reason long forgotten."
A line I know all to well...

Summer

Re: Decending precious one (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 04:18:05 AM AEST
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wow, this is great!

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