Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 02-June 13:02:01 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 71254 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Exhausted Existence [time] => 2004-11-12 18:11:08 [hometext] => Is There Someone Out there, 4 me?.... [bodytext] => Exhausted Existence
Rescue me from myself,
i'm driving Me insane......
Being so alone,
cover me in your Brilliance,
break my wall of stone.....
Searching for you
endlessly,
pursuing companionship
relentlessly,
being betrayed and mislead
instead,
but I go on hopelessly......

Inspiration and motivation
have escaped my heart,
Pathetically and reluctantly
trying to believe,
there is someone who can
fill the empty parts and
help me make A fresh start.

Defying myself,
ignoring my instincts,
trudging through betrayal
and deciet
to find my missing link..
"impossible"!!! I scream
to my mind,
impatient and weary,
feeling left behind....

Ready to quit and
desperate,
full of Self-Pity, remorse,
and regret,
telling my soul,
"It's not out there,because
you've been Vagabonding
all your life and haven't
found anything yet"........

I was planted in the womb
as a seed of Neglect and
irrelevance,
Which reflect's in my image
of A
Derelict with no Intelligence......

by: $av $auci ~*~906~*~ >3
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 48 [informant] => DesperateSoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Exhausted Existence

Contributed by DesperateSoul on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 06:11:08 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Exhausted Existence
Rescue me from myself,
i'm driving Me insane......
Being so alone,
cover me in your Brilliance,
break my wall of stone.....
Searching for you
endlessly,
pursuing companionship
relentlessly,
being betrayed and mislead
instead,
but I go on hopelessly......

Inspiration and motivation
have escaped my heart,
Pathetically and reluctantly
trying to believe,
there is someone who can
fill the empty parts and
help me make A fresh start.

Defying myself,
ignoring my instincts,
trudging through betrayal
and deciet
to find my missing link..
"impossible"!!! I scream
to my mind,
impatient and weary,
feeling left behind....

Ready to quit and
desperate,
full of Self-Pity, remorse,
and regret,
telling my soul,
"It's not out there,because
you've been Vagabonding
all your life and haven't
found anything yet"........

I was planted in the womb
as a seed of Neglect and
irrelevance,
Which reflect's in my image
of A
Derelict with no Intelligence......

by: $av $auci ~*~906~*~ >3




Copyright © DesperateSoul ... [ 2004-11-12 18:11:08]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Exhausted Existence (User Rating: 1 )
by buccaneer on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 07:01:56 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
this is great i can relate well to what u are saying.it's lovely. wishi could write so plain.


Re: Exhausted Existence (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Friday, 12th November 2004 @ 08:27:59 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
So much emotion with your ryme this night. So much pain you ask the question is some one out there. I believe in words, Words spoken, Words said, Words written. You have a ture gift of words even though they are sad and lonely they send a message. You are a gifted "POET" Keep on writing sharing your gift. This gift of words you have. For then one day someone will see. That is was you they were looking for. Best Wishes.


~~DENNIS~~


Re: Exhausted Existence (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 11:14:12 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
beautifully sad
written as only a fellow crippled pilgrim
could have.
yes
I feel your on this one.

Tje Wind.....




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com