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Array ( [sid] => 71311 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untrue friendship :'( [time] => 2004-11-13 06:28:06 [hometext] => the worst poem i have ever written [bodytext] => If this friendship was ever true,
You would be here for me,
Here so i could have a shoulder to cry on in my time of need,
But were you there?
No you werent,
You were off with our other friends,
Without me,
You hurt me so much,
Yet i still want you as my friend,
But this cannot be,
Tonight at 10 i will be gone,
Tonight at 10 i will be no more,
tonight at 10,
I will be in Hell,
Where i should be,
For i am too low for a high praise,
Our friendship was never true. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 263 [topic] => 16 [informant] => Beni [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Untrue friendship :'(

Contributed by Beni on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 06:28:06 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

If this friendship was ever true,
You would be here for me,
Here so i could have a shoulder to cry on in my time of need,
But were you there?
No you werent,
You were off with our other friends,
Without me,
You hurt me so much,
Yet i still want you as my friend,
But this cannot be,
Tonight at 10 i will be gone,
Tonight at 10 i will be no more,
tonight at 10,
I will be in Hell,
Where i should be,
For i am too low for a high praise,
Our friendship was never true.

Copyright © Beni ... [ 2004-11-13 06:28:06]
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Re: Untrue friendship :'( (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 07:17:26 AM AEST
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I thought this poem was good and far far above the worst poem I had ever read (as you suggested in your author's note)

It made me think of pain and being alone.

It moved me.

Kie

Re: Untrue friendship :'( (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:15:37 AM AEST
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Not worst, just free, words painted in pain....and encased in the polar ice...true words about being alone, words I can relate too, cool poem.

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