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Array ( [sid] => 71456 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => At Fault [time] => 2004-11-14 14:07:10 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It's all my fault it always is
That you love your wife over your kids
Everything I've said you just ignore
I wish that you would just walk out the door
You think I like her but that isn't true
I just pretend
Pretend for you
Thinking that maybe once you'll see
That she isn't right for you
I wan't you to be happy
But not if it takes you away from me
Especially if I get hurt in the process
I should not be getting hurt by someone you say loves me
Because that isn't love
To me she's the devil
I want her to die
If I had the chance I'd stab her in the heart
For tearing the family apart
Whoever likes her must be fooled
Her heart is colder than cold [comments] => 2 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 23 [informant] => UnlovedChild [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

At Fault

Contributed by UnlovedChild on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 02:07:10 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

It's all my fault it always is
That you love your wife over your kids
Everything I've said you just ignore
I wish that you would just walk out the door
You think I like her but that isn't true
I just pretend
Pretend for you
Thinking that maybe once you'll see
That she isn't right for you
I wan't you to be happy
But not if it takes you away from me
Especially if I get hurt in the process
I should not be getting hurt by someone you say loves me
Because that isn't love
To me she's the devil
I want her to die
If I had the chance I'd stab her in the heart
For tearing the family apart
Whoever likes her must be fooled
Her heart is colder than cold

Copyright © UnlovedChild ... [ 2004-11-14 14:07:10]
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Re: At Fault (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 02:42:00 PM AEST
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this is a really good poem... i'm sorry about this happening to u... hopefully everything works out for u one day...
Great write...

~!*!~Hugs~!*!~
~!*!~Jishes~!*!~

Re: At Fault (User Rating: 1 )
by cuddlytiger17 on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 06:17:35 PM AEST
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I'm really sorry. It's not right that you're going through what you are, I'm in a similar situation myself and know that it really sucks. Only difference is, my family was already messed up, the "new" woman only made it much worse. I wish you the best of luck with this hun. And believe me, it's not ur fault. *hugs*

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