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Array ( [sid] => 71532 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => SHE AIN'T JUST A 2nd LT [time] => 2004-11-15 00:15:19 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Not sure where she called home

She stayed pretty much alone

The job was tough, long, and hard

She made it look easy

Setting her emotions aside

She worked on the boys from back home.



When she arrived she was easy going and soft

War changes people brings out the best and their worst

She would not give up on the dying boys

She would order them not to die

Some had the fight to listen and not give up

A few came home walking and not in a bag.



2nd Lt. I swear at the end of her tour

Was better and knew just what to do

She would work with the head wounds and the blind

She was their sister, mom, and wife

Sitting and talking to them trying to help them find their way

No one knew that at the end of her shift

She would go back to her room and just cry.



In the open at the job she was calm and positive

No one knew the pain she buried deep inside.

35 years later she lives alone at her home, she remembers

And she still cries, but she never became a sister, mom, or wife.

I lost too many brothers, was a widow time and time again, my sons died

PTSD and Agent Orange is killing all the rest.



Don’t you know who I am?

I ain’t just a 2nd Lt., Not just Army Nurse Corp

I am your sister, mom, and wife

Damn it….I order you to live.
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SHE AIN'T JUST A 2nd LT

Contributed by docpardue on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 12:15:19 AM in AEST
Topic: war



Not sure where she called home

She stayed pretty much alone

The job was tough, long, and hard

She made it look easy

Setting her emotions aside

She worked on the boys from back home.



When she arrived she was easy going and soft

War changes people brings out the best and their worst

She would not give up on the dying boys

She would order them not to die

Some had the fight to listen and not give up

A few came home walking and not in a bag.



2nd Lt. I swear at the end of her tour

Was better and knew just what to do

She would work with the head wounds and the blind

She was their sister, mom, and wife

Sitting and talking to them trying to help them find their way

No one knew that at the end of her shift

She would go back to her room and just cry.



In the open at the job she was calm and positive

No one knew the pain she buried deep inside.

35 years later she lives alone at her home, she remembers

And she still cries, but she never became a sister, mom, or wife.

I lost too many brothers, was a widow time and time again, my sons died

PTSD and Agent Orange is killing all the rest.



Don’t you know who I am?

I ain’t just a 2nd Lt., Not just Army Nurse Corp

I am your sister, mom, and wife

Damn it….I order you to live.




Copyright © docpardue ... [ 2004-11-15 00:15:19]
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Re: SHE AIN'T JUST A 2nd LT (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 12:20:58 AM AEST
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Really touching write, Kerry.... as always..
Jenni


Re: SHE AIN'T JUST A 2nd LT (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 12:21:24 AM AEST
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This is truly a great tribute if ever my eyes have laid upon one. I will besure to remember that order while I am in the "sandbox"


Re: SHE AIN'T JUST A 2nd LT (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 03:49:18 PM AEST
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brought a tear to my eye very lovely write
Michelle




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