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Array ( [sid] => 71642 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => UNKNOWN [time] => 2004-11-15 18:40:21 [hometext] => I struggled whether to submit this, but here it is! Comments welcome... [bodytext] => Why is it I hide within
Rarely let others see who I really am
My own doubts don't make it clear
I too was created for Him

Bashfulness and shyness do abound
Truth be told, I also am a worthy soul
He created me with gifts to share
Gives me a chance to show I care
Perhaps I will feel I was lost, but found

Cheats you out of gifts He has given me
When I seclude them from your view
Pearl hidden on the bottom of the sea
Only has value when it is shared with thee
There must be a better way of liven

Truth will set you free
His light is the dawn of each new day
Another God given opportunity to serve
A chance to go all out, nothing in reserve
Work for your savior was meant to be [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Willofree [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

UNKNOWN

Contributed by Willofree on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 06:40:21 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Why is it I hide within
Rarely let others see who I really am
My own doubts don't make it clear
I too was created for Him

Bashfulness and shyness do abound
Truth be told, I also am a worthy soul
He created me with gifts to share
Gives me a chance to show I care
Perhaps I will feel I was lost, but found

Cheats you out of gifts He has given me
When I seclude them from your view
Pearl hidden on the bottom of the sea
Only has value when it is shared with thee
There must be a better way of liven

Truth will set you free
His light is the dawn of each new day
Another God given opportunity to serve
A chance to go all out, nothing in reserve
Work for your savior was meant to be

Copyright © Willofree ... [ 2004-11-15 18:40:21]
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Re: UNKNOWN (User Rating: 1 )
by kyletycz on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:33:04 AM AEST
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Nice write, i dont think anybody shows who they really are to more than 15% of the people they know, but thats just life i guess

l8r

Ninja Tycz

Re: UNKNOWN (User Rating: 1 )
by Delmina on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 10:41:46 AM AEST
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Sad but true and I would venture to say we hardly ever show our true selves to anyone. Too much pain and criticism to be found in that. But maybe being here and sharing a bit of ourselves with others is a step in the right direction

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