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Array ( [sid] => 71843 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ******* shattered. [time] => 2004-11-16 19:37:35 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Shattered into a thousand pieces thrown across the cold ground.
Broken hope is all that's left.. and all I feel is down.
You're someone elses' and something different, I thought I'd keep all faith.
But in the end.. loving you.. was all a big mistake.
It's a cause of heartache and all of this pain.
You're the cause of everything and for my heart being stained.
You can't imagine what feeling devours me when you cross my mind.
There's no use in covering all your god damn lies.
I used to think you were perfect, all that I wanted.
I used to believe you were my everything... but all my dreams are haunted..
with your face, with your mistake.. with every move we ever made.
With your lies, with those times.. when all I could do is stare in your eyes.
I'm so f'ing shattered.. because you were all that mattered...






There's this feeling.. that I'm not sure how to describe.
It keeps me up late, almost every night.
There's this thread of hope.. that keeps me believing.
I used to think that I was just dreaming..
..you up, through all the pieces of my world shattered
onto the floor.
Hoping for something so much more...
..than what I was destined to live..
..to fulfill the dreams of someone I couldn't forgive..
I couldn't live out this life I was heading towards.
I needed to get unstuck, open up the doors..
..to the path.. leading.. down to you..
..Up out of this hole, and in to something new. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 25 [informant] => Silentpwn [notes] => Title Edited for Language by Moderator_15 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
******* shattered.

Contributed by Silentpwn on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:37:35 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



Shattered into a thousand pieces thrown across the cold ground.
Broken hope is all that's left.. and all I feel is down.
You're someone elses' and something different, I thought I'd keep all faith.
But in the end.. loving you.. was all a big mistake.
It's a cause of heartache and all of this pain.
You're the cause of everything and for my heart being stained.
You can't imagine what feeling devours me when you cross my mind.
There's no use in covering all your god damn lies.
I used to think you were perfect, all that I wanted.
I used to believe you were my everything... but all my dreams are haunted..
with your face, with your mistake.. with every move we ever made.
With your lies, with those times.. when all I could do is stare in your eyes.
I'm so f'ing shattered.. because you were all that mattered...






There's this feeling.. that I'm not sure how to describe.
It keeps me up late, almost every night.
There's this thread of hope.. that keeps me believing.
I used to think that I was just dreaming..
..you up, through all the pieces of my world shattered
onto the floor.
Hoping for something so much more...
..than what I was destined to live..
..to fulfill the dreams of someone I couldn't forgive..
I couldn't live out this life I was heading towards.
I needed to get unstuck, open up the doors..
..to the path.. leading.. down to you..
..Up out of this hole, and in to something new.




Copyright © Silentpwn ... [ 2004-11-16 19:37:35]
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Re: ******* shattered. (User Rating: 1 )
by travisk on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:57:27 PM AEST
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liked it, and can somewhat identify bud.


Re: ******* shattered. (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 12:26:22 PM AEST
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I haven't been shattered yet, and I dont really wanna feel this way, but after reading your poem i feel as if I can relate to it on some level. Great the way u expressed things so easily and made me feel them.




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