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Array ( [sid] => 71879 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blackened Tears [time] => 2004-11-16 22:31:18 [hometext] => Its not that good...but i needed to write soemthing....comments always appreciated [bodytext] => My blackened tears stain my face
They’re falling at a constant pace
I’ve held them in for way to long
I’m just so tired of being “strong”

It’s time you saw the pain inside
So I no longer have to hide
Sympathy is not what I’m looking for
I just don’t want to hold it in anymore

But this is only in a dream
As my tears begin stream
No one’s here to see them fall
No one hears my silent call

You’ll never see the pain I feel
I’ve locked it inside with a seal
I will not give you that satisfaction
To see the pain you cause in action

Only alone will I cry
Anywhere else I think I’d die
I wish I could make you feel my pain
And yet towards you I feel no disdain [comments] => 4 [counter] => 512 [topic] => 32 [informant] => CrimsonTears [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Blackened Tears

Contributed by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 10:31:18 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

My blackened tears stain my face
They’re falling at a constant pace
I’ve held them in for way to long
I’m just so tired of being “strong”

It’s time you saw the pain inside
So I no longer have to hide
Sympathy is not what I’m looking for
I just don’t want to hold it in anymore

But this is only in a dream
As my tears begin stream
No one’s here to see them fall
No one hears my silent call

You’ll never see the pain I feel
I’ve locked it inside with a seal
I will not give you that satisfaction
To see the pain you cause in action

Only alone will I cry
Anywhere else I think I’d die
I wish I could make you feel my pain
And yet towards you I feel no disdain

Copyright Â© CrimsonTears ... [ 2004-11-16 22:31:18]
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Re: Blackened Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by sandy_poetrygodslove on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 10:57:11 PM AEST
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beautiful poem.you kept me interested. you made me feel your pain and wonder why the tears that flow like rain... take care.. im here if you want to talk....sandy

Re: Blackened Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 12:03:50 AM AEST
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Beautifully heart-wrenching. I think this is brilliant, captivating and inspirational from the first word to the last.

Take Care
- Becca

Re: Blackened Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:57:07 AM AEST
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This is one excellent poem, you have composed this so well. it really it a wonderful poem.

Hugs,
Jane

Re: Blackened Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:19:05 AM AEST
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wow this was so sad, yet beautiful at the same time, an excellent poem,

takecare,
pixie xx

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