|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Tears behind the music
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 12:29:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
|
I'll dabble away the tears,
Till the tissue is no longer dry,
As the music plays a counter melody,
To the sorrow in my eyes.
And I'll listen to the words,
To the story of my life,
As the guy behind the song,
Seems to sing behind my eyes.
I'll listen to his words...
And I'll cry a little more each time...
And I'll remember all these feelings,
My heart pounding through my veins,
And as I fall into the music...
I'll close my eyes again...
And as memories return to me,
The tears will still remain,
As he sings to me my story,
I'll lose my thoughts in you again...
I'll weep to his words...
But no tissue will wipe my tears away...
Because I need to cry...
Copyright ©
lostinmyself
... [
2004-11-17 12:29:30]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Tears behind the music
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 12:32:19 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I would say that you are one of the best writers of emotional poetry on this whole site , you really throw yourself into your poems, they deserve to be read by millions, this is a very emotional and very deep write, you have layed yourself bare in this write, wonderfully expressed, *hugs*
love pixie xx |
|
|
Re: Tears behind the music
(User Rating: 1 )
by BlindSuicide on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:03:39 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Yes very great write..very emotional and very self explained. Strangely i can relate in a few ways..many songs i listen to inspire me to write and many songs i listen to cause me to cry. Your not alone.
~Alucia~ |
|
|
Re: Tears behind the music
(User Rating: 1 )
by sabrina on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:08:56 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
That was sooooo amazing...I absolutely loved it. You are a unique poetry writer...I wish I could write like that!!! I love the emotion put into it, I definitely felt emotinon through it, very powerful!...AMAZING job on the poem..I think that is by far the best poem I have read....
GREAT JOB
~Sabrina |
|
|
Re: Tears behind the music
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:35:03 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
wow Phil, you are so emotional lately.
I hope you are well, but this is just another example of the awsome writes coming out of you! |
|
|
Re: Tears behind the music
(User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:49:38 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| I say philly that is one of the best poems i read .hugs. |
|
|
Re: Tears behind the music
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:08:04 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Delicate.
I have to say I was thoroughly moved by this all the way until the last line, where I expected it to rhyme along with the rest . . . and was kinda left hanging on for more.
But no bother - that's an aside of my nitpickyness.
Keep writing, Phil.
|
|
|
Re: Tears behind the music
(User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:29:50 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
how about "Because I Need To Cry"?..
It's amazing..I loved it. |
|
|
Re: Tears behind the music
(User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 06:51:33 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Again, you have bested yourself. Your poetry shows a polish and maturity that grows with each new post. Very impressed.
Stitch |
|
|
Re: Tears behind the music
(User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on
Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 02:49:53 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Phil this is just totally AMAZING!
I love your style more every time i
read more of your poetry.
This is very deep and emotional,
I can relate to this as there are a couple
of songs that can just make me burst
into tears.
I love this poem so much,
It has got to be one of my favourite poems.
*hugs you*
You take care now
*hugs you again*
Love
Stace x |
|
|
Re: Tears behind the music
(User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 03:15:58 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
absolutely a gorgeous write... hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
|
|
Re: Tears behind the music
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on
Sunday, 2nd January 2005 @ 11:12:27 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| WOW! What a powerful, emotional write. Excellent job. *S* Cynthia |
|
|
Re: Tears behind the music
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Friday, 25th March 2005 @ 07:31:52 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Music is someone's heart composed into a melody. I think that is why it touches us often. I try to imagine the hurt or love or whatever the composer was feeling when he sat down to write the score.
You write so well Lost. We all need to cry at times.
"As he sings to me my story,
I'll lose my thoughts in you again..."
Beautiful...
Kie
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
