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Array ( [sid] => 71949 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => if i wrote a poem... what would it be called? [time] => 2004-11-17 14:07:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm here all day, trying to find another way to say i hate you...
or that i hate me, or that sometimes i'll just cry and cry.
Stairing at the screen, lost in the pixels...
It's one of those days when you sit on a swing in the dark for hours instead of going home.
When you don't really feel like dying, but your lost for find a reason to live.
It's one of those days you sit on the swing and you wrap your arms around the chains and close your eyes, feeling the wind tickle at your face, thinking that your sitting on a swing with your eyes closed.
As aposed so sitting on the bathroom floor at two in the morning crying because you dreamt it again and you've got your eyes closed and your thinking about sitting on that swing.
When one person controls whether im happy or sad have I become obssessed?
I still cant find the reason...
Every breath is harder than the last...
The one thing I want i had but cant have back...
When the tv is the only one that says the right things,
And when I'm here and your not. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 13 [informant] => surge_joebot [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

if i wrote a poem... what would it be called?

Contributed by surge_joebot on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:07:18 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'm here all day, trying to find another way to say i hate you...
or that i hate me, or that sometimes i'll just cry and cry.
Stairing at the screen, lost in the pixels...
It's one of those days when you sit on a swing in the dark for hours instead of going home.
When you don't really feel like dying, but your lost for find a reason to live.
It's one of those days you sit on the swing and you wrap your arms around the chains and close your eyes, feeling the wind tickle at your face, thinking that your sitting on a swing with your eyes closed.
As aposed so sitting on the bathroom floor at two in the morning crying because you dreamt it again and you've got your eyes closed and your thinking about sitting on that swing.
When one person controls whether im happy or sad have I become obssessed?
I still cant find the reason...
Every breath is harder than the last...
The one thing I want i had but cant have back...
When the tv is the only one that says the right things,
And when I'm here and your not.

Copyright © surge_joebot ... [ 2004-11-17 14:07:18]
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Re: if i wrote a poem... what would it be called? (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:34:33 PM AEST
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This is a good poem!

Re: if i wrote a poem... what would it be called? (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 12:02:40 PM AEST
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...my god that was an amazing poem. What else can i say? This poem just really blew me away. That line where u talked about obsessing and putting happiness in other people's hands was really what hit me most. Words cannot describe how much I liked this poem and I hope you've got more material cuz i wanna read it!

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