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Array ( [sid] => 72021 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Demon shadow [time] => 2004-11-17 22:01:30 [hometext] => ok this is the first song i ever tried to do..... dont laugh [bodytext] => I see the demon in your shadow
consuming you heart making it hollow
evil sinking into your pores
opening up unlocked doors

the hate is taking over you can't escape it now
you wanna run away but don't know how
the evil's catching up to you
so what in the hell will you do

malice fills you up inside
and everthing you knew slowly dies
the demon's taking over your soul
and slowly you mind loses control

the hate is taking over you can't escape it now
you wanna run away but don't know how
the evil's catching up to you
so what in the hell will you do

god won't help you now your posessed
darkness and hate is what you've been blessed
you will never be redeamed
and you can never wake up from this dream

the hate is taking over you can't escape it now
you wanna run away but don't know how
the evil's catching up to you
so what in the hell will you do

just shut your eyes and welcome it in
it will be over soon its getting close to the end
you will never get to see the light
just give up and end the fight [comments] => 2 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Dragontear27 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Demon shadow

Contributed by Dragontear27 on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:01:30 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



I see the demon in your shadow
consuming you heart making it hollow
evil sinking into your pores
opening up unlocked doors

the hate is taking over you can't escape it now
you wanna run away but don't know how
the evil's catching up to you
so what in the hell will you do

malice fills you up inside
and everthing you knew slowly dies
the demon's taking over your soul
and slowly you mind loses control

the hate is taking over you can't escape it now
you wanna run away but don't know how
the evil's catching up to you
so what in the hell will you do

god won't help you now your posessed
darkness and hate is what you've been blessed
you will never be redeamed
and you can never wake up from this dream

the hate is taking over you can't escape it now
you wanna run away but don't know how
the evil's catching up to you
so what in the hell will you do

just shut your eyes and welcome it in
it will be over soon its getting close to the end
you will never get to see the light
just give up and end the fight




Copyright © Dragontear27 ... [ 2004-11-17 22:01:30]
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Re: Demon shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by tasteof_ink on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:44:28 PM AEST
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I like it. I didn't laugh at all. Nicely written. Read and comment my poems if you'd like. Good Job on your first song.
-x-katie-x-


Re: Demon shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:55:45 AM AEST
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Wy would anyone laugh. It's good.
Especially as a first time.
There are a few mistakes, but it's all good.
Great write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx




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