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Array ( [sid] => 72110 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dangling [time] => 2004-11-18 14:18:41 [hometext] => I am almost surprised by this write. Please Comment [bodytext] => In her sleep,
Fretfull dreams
While awake,
Silent screams
Open wide,
Her eyes plead

Hands bound,
No escape
Red lips closed,
Still they shake
Struggling,
Her will to break

Salty tears,
Drip from her chin
Warm red tounge,
Invites them in
Fingers wet,
Slippery Sin

Strategic cuts,
In loving places
She writhes in pain,
As he paces
Pleads compassion,
He has no patience

Her blue eyes,
Screaming, pleading
He only wants,
To see her bleeding
On her pain,
Insanity's feeding

His fingers touch,
Skin is coarse
In his eyes,
No remorse
She'll be his,
Even if by force

Dirty games,
Now she loses
She his whore,
When he chooses
Escaping thoughts,
Proving foolish...

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Dangling

Contributed by _Raspberry_ on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:18:41 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

In her sleep,
Fretfull dreams
While awake,
Silent screams
Open wide,
Her eyes plead

Hands bound,
No escape
Red lips closed,
Still they shake
Struggling,
Her will to break

Salty tears,
Drip from her chin
Warm red tounge,
Invites them in
Fingers wet,
Slippery Sin

Strategic cuts,
In loving places
She writhes in pain,
As he paces
Pleads compassion,
He has no patience

Her blue eyes,
Screaming, pleading
He only wants,
To see her bleeding
On her pain,
Insanity's feeding

His fingers touch,
Skin is coarse
In his eyes,
No remorse
She'll be his,
Even if by force

Dirty games,
Now she loses
She his whore,
When he chooses
Escaping thoughts,
Proving foolish...

Copyright © _Raspberry_ ... [ 2004-11-18 14:18:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dangling (User Rating: 1 )
by matts_sweetie_04 on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:27:03 PM AEST
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This poem was dark and sad but a good write. Keep up the good work!

Re: Dangling (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:33:00 PM AEST
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this poem is dark and kinda twisted....but i loved it....awesome job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: Dangling (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:46:33 PM AEST
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The poetic form is good..I can't comment on the subject it horrifies me (I just made a comment..lol) It was powerful..chilling. It's like a really good actor that can make you hate him..

Re: Dangling (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:23:42 PM AEST
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wow that was so well written, dark and deep, I love this one,

pixie xx

Re: Dangling (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-on-the-wind on Monday, 7th March 2011 @ 11:08:55 AM AEST
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dark indeed, makes you feel for the victim..

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