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Array ( [sid] => 72178 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Misery [time] => 2004-11-18 20:13:40 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Living a life that is so Empty
Tried everything to Fill that Hole
Yet you remained empty as always
And you realized that in you lies no Soul

So you give up all you dreams
Trade in everything you onced believed In
Do what was once unthinkable
Yes, now you live in Sin

Your conscience has gone numb
You can't take much More
You'll never see the light of god
You've turned into a Whore

As if that weren't enought
Your younger sister catches your Eye
Shes headed down that same road of perdition
Now you realize you deserve to Die

Your poison has destroyed all those around you
Even the one you swore to Protect
As you suffer your unbearable misery
Your emptyness is finally filled with nothing more than Regret [comments] => 7 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 32 [informant] => GothicHollie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Misery

Contributed by GothicHollie on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:13:40 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Living a life that is so Empty
Tried everything to Fill that Hole
Yet you remained empty as always
And you realized that in you lies no Soul

So you give up all you dreams
Trade in everything you onced believed In
Do what was once unthinkable
Yes, now you live in Sin

Your conscience has gone numb
You can't take much More
You'll never see the light of god
You've turned into a Whore

As if that weren't enought
Your younger sister catches your Eye
Shes headed down that same road of perdition
Now you realize you deserve to Die

Your poison has destroyed all those around you
Even the one you swore to Protect
As you suffer your unbearable misery
Your emptyness is finally filled with nothing more than Regret




Copyright © GothicHollie ... [ 2004-11-18 20:13:40]
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Re: Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:19:25 PM AEST
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very dark-- nice rhyming *


Re: Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 01:00:29 AM AEST
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Shadows call to me as I read this one,Well done.


Re: Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by Always on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 07:09:21 PM AEST
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Crap man, that hits you in the gut eh! *s*, thanx for the read.


Re: Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 08:12:26 PM AEST
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chilling.


Re: Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by Inevitable on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 02:43:47 PM AEST
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That's dark Hollie


Re: Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by spirit_of_dark_tears on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 12:47:06 AM AEST
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dark as crimsons stone it self your poem seems to feed of my mind were all doomed to die you call apon the shadows


Re: Misery (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 04:14:56 PM AEST
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Great dark write.




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