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Array ( [sid] => 72182 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Who Stole the Stars? [time] => 2004-11-18 20:22:44 [hometext] => a breakup poem focusing on her eyes [bodytext] => Your eyes were the night sky I once stared into
jet black...centered in midnight blue
Who stole the twilight that never dies?
Who stole the stars from those eyes?

I guess I didn't know what to say
to a night sky fading away
Who said the moon never cries?
Who stole the stars from those eyes?

Now, the night breeze will surely come
the one that leaves us feeling numb
So, who filled the clouds with goodbyes?
Who stole the stars from those eyes?

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Who Stole the Stars?

Contributed by justjonesy on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:22:44 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Your eyes were the night sky I once stared into
jet black...centered in midnight blue
Who stole the twilight that never dies?
Who stole the stars from those eyes?

I guess I didn't know what to say
to a night sky fading away
Who said the moon never cries?
Who stole the stars from those eyes?

Now, the night breeze will surely come
the one that leaves us feeling numb
So, who filled the clouds with goodbyes?
Who stole the stars from those eyes?





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Re: Who Stole the Stars? (User Rating: 1 )
by N0body on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:25:44 PM AEST
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Interesting concept


Re: Who Stole the Stars? (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:33:46 PM AEST
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Who stole the stars fromt hose eyes?

no one wants to say it, so I will.. you dropped a t..lol.
The poem was lovely. kind of like crystal..


Re: Who Stole the Stars? (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:38:50 PM AEST
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i know...sorry i saw it once it was written....a little too late...i wish i could fix it...I also missed a question mark in the second to last line


Re: Who Stole the Stars? (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:59:43 PM AEST
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aww this is a sad but beautiful write.. you can feel the emotion and sadness in this.. very powerful and expressive write on losing a loved one... just think there is better out there and you will over come this someday you will find the right one .. someday

Peace and hope

JENNI


Re: Who Stole the Stars? (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 09:48:23 AM AEST
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This had a lyrical yet unique feel to it.

Break-ups are never easy but they make for astounding poetry. Keep writing your heart, the pen will speak...

Kie


Re: Who Stole the Stars? (User Rating: 1 )
by zenmind on Wednesday, 1st December 2004 @ 06:06:22 PM AEST
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Who said the moon never cries?

Great line! great image!

It's always nice to hear a unique voice.

Be True,
zenmind


Re: Who Stole the Stars? (User Rating: 1 )
by AnastasiaN on Saturday, 12th February 2005 @ 10:59:52 AM AEST
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well i wanted to say thanks for your previous comments as well as this is an awesome poem. i love your play on words, it creates a soft and sad image. keep given'er lol




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