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Array ( [sid] => 72222 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rose [time] => 2004-11-19 04:29:26 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You held this rose so close to your heart
petal by petal this rose it fell apart
and the crison red that use to remind you of our love
has blackend your heart
in the rain the colour of the rose is running
and it puts blood on my hands
but you stay cold regardless
untill the last of the rose withers away in your hands
just ashes now
of a fire that burns in our hearts forever
just ashes now
ashes and embers
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Rose

Contributed by loopylou on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 04:29:26 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



You held this rose so close to your heart
petal by petal this rose it fell apart
and the crison red that use to remind you of our love
has blackend your heart
in the rain the colour of the rose is running
and it puts blood on my hands
but you stay cold regardless
untill the last of the rose withers away in your hands
just ashes now
of a fire that burns in our hearts forever
just ashes now
ashes and embers




Copyright © loopylou ... [ 2004-11-19 04:29:26]
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Re: Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 04:56:31 AM AEST
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awesome, i love it


Re: Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 08:33:11 AM AEST
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Beautiful write displaying feelings in vivid thoughts and vivid images, cool poem.


Re: Rose (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:33:32 AM AEST
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Really vivid.. Great write.. I loved it




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