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Array ( [sid] => 72296 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A real smile [time] => 2004-11-19 16:25:15 [hometext] => Comments welcomed ENJOY [bodytext] => As I make this gash
This time
It must last
Cut down deep
To the bone
As the blood flows
I watch it
A thought comes to mind
You wont know why
You will never know
The pain I went though
The suffring I did
Just to make you smile
But you didnt know
So I shall tell you now
I will write it down
On the walls
You cant miss it then
I will explain
I am sorry
For what I've done
Please dont be mad
I am truly happy now
You never knew
But now it though
It wasnt your fault
PLease dont take
The blame
I love you
But hate myself
I didnt mean to
Now I close my eyes
As death knocks
I answer with a smile
My first real smile
And my last [comments] => 2 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 36 [informant] => vampyrekiss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

A real smile

Contributed by vampyrekiss on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 04:25:15 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

As I make this gash
This time
It must last
Cut down deep
To the bone
As the blood flows
I watch it
A thought comes to mind
You wont know why
You will never know
The pain I went though
The suffring I did
Just to make you smile
But you didnt know
So I shall tell you now
I will write it down
On the walls
You cant miss it then
I will explain
I am sorry
For what I've done
Please dont be mad
I am truly happy now
You never knew
But now it though
It wasnt your fault
PLease dont take
The blame
I love you
But hate myself
I didnt mean to
Now I close my eyes
As death knocks
I answer with a smile
My first real smile
And my last

Copyright © vampyrekiss ... [ 2004-11-19 16:25:15]
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Re: A real smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 04:55:12 PM AEST
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great flow and style *

Re: A real smile (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 06:26:47 PM AEST
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So much pain, So many tears. So many feelings.
This self-hatred i know to well. Wanting to die and be release from this living hell. Your words are heard Your words are felt. Hope you find some peace at last.

~~DENNIS~~

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