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make your dream come true like a sun shine
and you will live with happiness for ever

If I were the moon, I would sail along with you
Bring you the garland made of stars
and you will feel your love never be sad

If I were the wind, I would blow you a kiss
Bring you romantic love in your heart
and you will free to hold me tight without shyness

If I were the rain, I would wash your sorrow
Bring you happiness that shower like waterfalls
and you will see your tears vanish for ever

If I were the cold, I would touch you gently
Bring you loving breeze to hold me closely
and you will see my love for you is greatly

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathaivam

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If I were.......

Contributed by ravisada on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 05:14:15 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

If I were the sun, I would brighten up your day
make your dream come true like a sun shine
and you will live with happiness for ever

If I were the moon, I would sail along with you
Bring you the garland made of stars
and you will feel your love never be sad

If I were the wind, I would blow you a kiss
Bring you romantic love in your heart
and you will free to hold me tight without shyness

If I were the rain, I would wash your sorrow
Bring you happiness that shower like waterfalls
and you will see your tears vanish for ever

If I were the cold, I would touch you gently
Bring you loving breeze to hold me closely
and you will see my love for you is greatly

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathaivam

Copyright © ravisada ... [ 2004-11-20 05:14:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: If I were....... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 06:00:16 AM AEST
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Awww this is beautiful. Very well written.

Take Care
- Becca

Re: If I were....... (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 06:49:03 AM AEST
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This is brilliant, i like it alot.

Hugs,
Jane

Re: If I were....... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 07:43:38 AM AEST
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Awww this is very sweet...
Jenni

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