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Suicide Notes
Contributed by
adsalamon
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Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 08:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Suicide notes Write bored housewife frail Replace "I Luv U's" as classroom mail The persecuted that cannot avail That cannot win, Though never lose That will die, But never fade Words spoken stronger then any voice Symbolic ending, the curtian drawn Pain poured down as as ink Its beauty, a halo, scared so deep For all to see
Copyright ©
adsalamon
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2002-11-22 08:00:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Suicide Notes
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 04:39:08 PM AEST (User
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I like your style in this poem
Thanks for sharing it
.::��`�..� OreO�..���`::. |
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Re: Suicide Notes
(User Rating: 1 ) by AngryPrincess on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 12:51:51 PM AEST (User
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i feel like the "bored housewife"...this is exactly how i feel...beautifully done
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