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Grey Dawn
Contributed by
luinil
on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 04:20:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You sang a sad song to me yesterday
And together we cried
But its lonely in my head today
It must be warmer inside
I remember the first time I smiled
The day you caught me off guard
You stole my peace back when I was a child
Why do you make this so hard?
Why cant I just be free from this chain
That holds my head so far down
Should I release my hold on your pain
Would I be broken without
I think today Ill just lay down and rest
While the rain passes on
Close my eyes in the sins I possess
And stay here till the grey dawn
Copyright ©
luinil
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2004-11-20 16:20:44]
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Re: Grey Dawn
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by theMoth on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 04:45:42 PM AEST
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Even better than an episode
of Magnum P.I.
It's really a nice poem.
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