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My flowers of hope have blossomed,
and are long gone.
My heart has pounded,
and now does not even beat.
My eyes once saw beauty,
but now all I see is black.
My head made good decisions,
but now a thought dosn't cross my mind.
I once loved someone,
but now I don't even have feelings.
I am dead inside and out.
Isn't THIS what you wanted?

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I'm Dead

Contributed by shattered_heart on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Can't you see that I am dead?
My flowers of hope have blossomed,
and are long gone.
My heart has pounded,
and now does not even beat.
My eyes once saw beauty,
but now all I see is black.
My head made good decisions,
but now a thought dosn't cross my mind.
I once loved someone,
but now I don't even have feelings.
I am dead inside and out.
Isn't THIS what you wanted?

Copyright © shattered_heart ... [ 2004-11-20 21:45:00]
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Re: I'm Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Gimpie on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:50:48 PM AEST
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wow, I like. It's pretty deep. good write

Re: I'm Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 09:52:04 PM AEST
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it's not what i wanted.....people are no fun when their dead. People are fun when their alive...watching the life fade from their eyes is, well, tedious. Emotional torture is much more amusing, wouldn't you agree?
I like this....course, i wouldn't comment if i didn't....well, i might, but not likely....anyway, before i start babbling away (which i think i'm doing already) I'll say bye and hope to read more. ^_^

Re: I'm Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 11:23:41 PM AEST
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good write. it doesnt matter what they want it matters what you want.

Re: I'm Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 01:23:20 AM AEST
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awesome, i love it!

Re: I'm Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 03:53:36 PM AEST
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this is a great poem...i kinda cannected to it...great job....i loved it

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: I'm Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 09:02:35 PM AEST
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i have no idea how anyone could want this of you

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