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My Reverie
Contributed by
matt73
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Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 02:15:24 PM in AEST
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We walk in colors, painted with patience
we intertwine our brights and darks
we talk in poetry, writtin with purity
we intertwine our thoughts
we fight in wars, of historic significance
we forgive and forget
we love in reverie
we awake with memories
we meet again tonight.
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Re: My Reverie
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by a_bear on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 02:19:55 PM AEST
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| How do you do it? Walk in colors painted with patience? lol..my greatest shortcoming..inpatience..I must paint with bright frenzied colors..yours are soft and calming.. lovely work. Whoever you meet tonight..say hello for me and tell her..well, say she's lucky. :-) |
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Re: My Reverie
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by emystar on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 02:34:22 PM AEST
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Very strong write. Little words that say much.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: My Reverie
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by fielding88 on
Wednesday, 26th January 2005 @ 06:25:48 PM AEST
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| Some of these thoughts are just so well delivered and obviously mulled over and ther's such a high level of quality here...amazing job |
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Re: My Reverie
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by xMizeriex on
Monday, 7th February 2005 @ 08:37:32 AM AEST
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Interesting write.
Bx |
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