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Array ( [sid] => 72581 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Forever Fading [time] => 2004-11-21 18:27:50 [hometext] => This poem is about a love that has faded i still have the love for him and it wont go away. What better than to just write about it lol. It could've been better but i can always come back and change. I appreciate comments. Thanks [bodytext] => I imagined us together
and tears rolled from my eyes
you only cared about yourself
and didn't hear my lonely cries
my love for you was so true
yet it felt so broken
i couldn't stay in this relationship
with only wishing and hoping

You slowly slipped away from me
as we grew apart
we seemed so close together
but we were so far
you were my angel from above
you were my everything
now i'm a fallen angel
struggling without its wings

You were my strength and my hope
now i feel so empty
i'm trying to move on
but i am blind and cannot see
i thought you loved me
and loved all my ways
but we are no more
and forever we will fade.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 22 [informant] => dstar [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Forever Fading

Contributed by dstar on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 06:27:50 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I imagined us together
and tears rolled from my eyes
you only cared about yourself
and didn't hear my lonely cries
my love for you was so true
yet it felt so broken
i couldn't stay in this relationship
with only wishing and hoping

You slowly slipped away from me
as we grew apart
we seemed so close together
but we were so far
you were my angel from above
you were my everything
now i'm a fallen angel
struggling without its wings

You were my strength and my hope
now i feel so empty
i'm trying to move on
but i am blind and cannot see
i thought you loved me
and loved all my ways
but we are no more
and forever we will fade.

Copyright © dstar ... [ 2004-11-21 18:27:50]
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Re: Forever Fading (User Rating: 1 )
by faffeee on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 07:03:40 PM AEST
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im sorry :( good luck in the future in finding someone you love who loves you back, someone who really is worth your love. katie xx

Re: Forever Fading (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 10:08:18 PM AEST
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i know how it feels to be an angel without wings bu t i did not lose mine when i fell out of love i tore mine off for the sake of it

keep writing and i am sure he does not know what he had in someone like you they never ever do

so everyone is left feeling taken for granted

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