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Array ( [sid] => 72609 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => HER DEATH [time] => 2004-11-21 21:13:42 [hometext] => THIS WAS HARD TO WRITE WHEN I WROTE IT BACK IN JULY IT'S JUST HARD TO SAY GOOD BYE [bodytext] => I went and saw her today.
I haven't seen her in many
years.
I laid flowers down beside
her with a tear,
And wished that she was
still here.

People may pass from life
to death.
But the love I have for her
has never left,
Has never weakened,
Is as strong as the day I
fell in love with her.

I didn't go see her that day
they laid her in the ground.
I couldn't the pain was to great.
It took all I had everything
in me just to go today.

But I had to.
I needed to.

I needed to know and end
this dream she may come
back to me.

Tears from heaven rained down
from above.
As I walked up to the place
where she lays.
A smile of remembering the
good old days seem to appear
on my face.

SHE IS GONE.

Never did I want to see her
grave.
But I had to someday.

I feel upon my knees wailed
a great tear.
Praying and wishing.
But knowing it is really
real.

You my love shall I always
love, For you shall forever
be loved by me.
And now with this KISS
may your soul now rest
and dream.

Dream a beautiful dream
within thy sleep and
forever know,
I LOVE YOU
SO.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN
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HER DEATH

Contributed by lemmen on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 09:13:42 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I went and saw her today.
I haven't seen her in many
years.
I laid flowers down beside
her with a tear,
And wished that she was
still here.

People may pass from life
to death.
But the love I have for her
has never left,
Has never weakened,
Is as strong as the day I
fell in love with her.

I didn't go see her that day
they laid her in the ground.
I couldn't the pain was to great.
It took all I had everything
in me just to go today.

But I had to.
I needed to.

I needed to know and end
this dream she may come
back to me.

Tears from heaven rained down
from above.
As I walked up to the place
where she lays.
A smile of remembering the
good old days seem to appear
on my face.

SHE IS GONE.

Never did I want to see her
grave.
But I had to someday.

I feel upon my knees wailed
a great tear.
Praying and wishing.
But knowing it is really
real.

You my love shall I always
love, For you shall forever
be loved by me.
And now with this KISS
may your soul now rest
and dream.

Dream a beautiful dream
within thy sleep and
forever know,
I LOVE YOU
SO.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN

Copyright © lemmen ... [ 2004-11-21 21:13:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: HER DEATH (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 10:22:01 PM AEST
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heartwrenching write. nothing takes the place of loss except for pain, but eventually that will change =/

Re: HER DEATH (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 02:45:51 AM AEST
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tears fall from my eyes, because i know how it feels to cry and walk in the shoes of someone who has lost the one special love that they will forever hold in their heart. to this day i still haven't made it to see his grave maybe one day i will find the strength, my heart pours out to you.. i will not say it will get better, or eaiser because no one really knows, but i will lend you my shoulder to cry on, and my ears to listen to you...

tasha

Re: HER DEATH (User Rating: 1 )
by OnAngelswings on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 12:08:13 PM AEST
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This is so hard to read and keep reading...its beautiful....your love for her is beautiful....something you'll never lose....Shari

Re: HER DEATH (User Rating: 1 )
by troubled on Friday, 26th January 2007 @ 03:31:38 AM AEST
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Very emotional, but very well written, i wish you well xxx

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