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When not matter what I do

In the end I always feel like I want to die

Everyone knows that is nothing new

Just remember this is not because of you or anyone else

The blame for how I feel I can only put on my self

Today is my birthday and I only feel worse

This will be my twenty first

And look how I am spending it

Feeling tired and very sick

Feeling like a broken

Something that never bends and breaks

But this is really nobodies token

I was just a mistake

And never should have been born

All my dreams have been torn

And I feel so alone

Left in this world with a heart turning to stone

I guess I just feel bad

I should get use to feeling sad

I want to cut my self again

It’s the only way I know to tend

To all my pain when it manifests

I wonder if this is just another test
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Tending To My Pain When It Manifests

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 01:42:22 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I do not know why I even try

When not matter what I do

In the end I always feel like I want to die

Everyone knows that is nothing new

Just remember this is not because of you or anyone else

The blame for how I feel I can only put on my self

Today is my birthday and I only feel worse

This will be my twenty first

And look how I am spending it

Feeling tired and very sick

Feeling like a broken

Something that never bends and breaks

But this is really nobodies token

I was just a mistake

And never should have been born

All my dreams have been torn

And I feel so alone

Left in this world with a heart turning to stone

I guess I just feel bad

I should get use to feeling sad

I want to cut my self again

It’s the only way I know to tend

To all my pain when it manifests

I wonder if this is just another test

Copyright Â© Doriens_Picture ... [ 2004-11-23 01:42:22]
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Re: Tending To My Pain When It Manifests (User Rating: 1 )
by WildfireRose on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 01:57:56 AM AEST
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That was very moving, I hope everything turns out allright for you in the end..you are only a year older thane me..I'll be 20 in april...have a good day..keep your chin up :)

Re: Tending To My Pain When It Manifests (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 02:00:58 AM AEST
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Wo my friend,
This is so sad!
Cheer up 'cause u r a great writer and I can certainly say if u hang in there someday you'll realize that your voice should be heard.
I can understand your feelings of sadness but please don't waste your talent as it's a precious gift from God.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy

Re: Tending To My Pain When It Manifests (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 02:02:36 AM AEST
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Oh yeah,
Happy, Happy b day

Re: Tending To My Pain When It Manifests (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 05:46:02 AM AEST
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can feel your pain coming through in waves, *hugs* Hapy birthday my friend, takecare,
pixie xx

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