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Array ( [sid] => 72786 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => About An Angel [time] => 2004-11-23 01:46:09 [hometext] => this is a poem i wrote today its not very good but its what i had to post [bodytext] => There is an angel in my life who is the most beautiful girl I have ever seen

She has the saddest eyes mine have ever looked into and I have fallen for her

Her sad eyes and tears tear apart heart apart because I love her with my whole being

She is more than special to me and I more than care for her

Her mouth is beautiful and her lips always have me wanting a kiss

But I dare not kiss such beauty she could easily steal my breath away

And like angels are meant to do lead me to a heaven where I do not want to be

Though I would die happily after kissing her having felt the ultimate bliss

But I do not coz I could not be here to protect my angel if I am led a stray

I would give my soul to feel her soft pail skin that even porcelain and silk envy

I want nothing more than to look at her face and have her hair cover mine

As we lay in my bed forgetting all about gravity space and time

We would be lifted up above the ground by the angels who watch over us

Angels who know a love as pure as what we have can be the only one

Filled with a determination to escape it all and a strong trust

I find my way to escape this world in her eyes and she is the only one

Who has ever made me feel this way and who has made me one of the devout

She is truly my angel and her wings wrap around my whole world

She is more than everything more than I can ever truly let out

Her beauty is amazing to me and sends my heart into an endless twirl

I am alive for her she gives my heart a new reason to beat

She is really all that I will ever need and she will always be so sweet

I will always cherish her ands always more than love her

But she will never really know how much I do love her
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About An Angel

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 01:46:09 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



There is an angel in my life who is the most beautiful girl I have ever seen

She has the saddest eyes mine have ever looked into and I have fallen for her

Her sad eyes and tears tear apart heart apart because I love her with my whole being

She is more than special to me and I more than care for her

Her mouth is beautiful and her lips always have me wanting a kiss

But I dare not kiss such beauty she could easily steal my breath away

And like angels are meant to do lead me to a heaven where I do not want to be

Though I would die happily after kissing her having felt the ultimate bliss

But I do not coz I could not be here to protect my angel if I am led a stray

I would give my soul to feel her soft pail skin that even porcelain and silk envy

I want nothing more than to look at her face and have her hair cover mine

As we lay in my bed forgetting all about gravity space and time

We would be lifted up above the ground by the angels who watch over us

Angels who know a love as pure as what we have can be the only one

Filled with a determination to escape it all and a strong trust

I find my way to escape this world in her eyes and she is the only one

Who has ever made me feel this way and who has made me one of the devout

She is truly my angel and her wings wrap around my whole world

She is more than everything more than I can ever truly let out

Her beauty is amazing to me and sends my heart into an endless twirl

I am alive for her she gives my heart a new reason to beat

She is really all that I will ever need and she will always be so sweet

I will always cherish her ands always more than love her

But she will never really know how much I do love her




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Re: About An Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by WildfireRose on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 02:06:38 AM AEST
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If it is from the heart it cannot be a bad poem, it was beautiful, I know how you feel ..keep writing you are great at it..:)


Re: About An Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 02:09:24 AM AEST
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Not good u gotta be kidding me.
This is a masterpeice of heavenly beauty.
U have a big heart and so much passion to share with this angel.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: About An Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by mylastwords on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 03:00:38 AM AEST
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Hey,

Beautiful write, I love it. Keep it up!

Luv Jade xxooxx


Re: About An Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by bonita2689 on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 05:57:56 PM AEST
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How enchanting! I believe you should give yourself more credit for this one... What a delightful line, But I dare not kiss such beauty she could easily steal my breath away
Magnificent!


Re: About An Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 01:09:38 AM AEST
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I find my way to escape this world in her eyes

I think..You are a wonderful poet and can steal any woman with just this line..




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