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Array ( [sid] => 72921 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => DARKSIDE REVILED [time] => 2004-11-23 22:38:20 [hometext] => ( PLEASE BE WARNED THIS IS DISTURBING) [bodytext] => I have reviled,
MY accepts.
My desires.
My dreams.
My love.
My hate.
My joy.
My pain.
My life.
My death.
My all,
Has been reviled.

Written in rhythm.
Written in song.
Written in truth.
Written in lies.
Written for all to see.

But still there is a darker
side within me.

Things I dare not say.
Things I dare not write.
Things that would put me away
FOR LIFE.

Dreams and fantasy,
Sex and violence,
Death and hate,
Blood and pain
Pleasure of a sicken
MIND.

The Ted Bundy kind.
Jeffery Dalmer could have been
my friend.
Charles Mason could have been
my dad.
The Ice Man is my brother.

ARE YOU SCARED YET.

I AM.

Dreaming of thoughts of death
while asleep and awake.
The voices I hear are not just
mine.
The pleasure of pain inflected
upon one's self.
Pleasure of death would be a
great escape.
Pleasure of sex combine with blood
and pain is just a fantasy.

Don't be scared I could never act
upon my desires.
I'm not that strong.
I know the difference between
RIGHT
and
WRONG.

But could you write your dark
thoughts.
And share them with all,
For all to see.
The darkest side of you,
Are you afraid.

I AM.

I am afraid of me.
My dreams,
My life.
Is becoming nothing.
I fear my reality of the
DARK-SIDE.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN

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DARKSIDE REVILED

Contributed by lemmen on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:38:20 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I have reviled,
MY accepts.
My desires.
My dreams.
My love.
My hate.
My joy.
My pain.
My life.
My death.
My all,
Has been reviled.

Written in rhythm.
Written in song.
Written in truth.
Written in lies.
Written for all to see.

But still there is a darker
side within me.

Things I dare not say.
Things I dare not write.
Things that would put me away
FOR LIFE.

Dreams and fantasy,
Sex and violence,
Death and hate,
Blood and pain
Pleasure of a sicken
MIND.

The Ted Bundy kind.
Jeffery Dalmer could have been
my friend.
Charles Mason could have been
my dad.
The Ice Man is my brother.

ARE YOU SCARED YET.

I AM.

Dreaming of thoughts of death
while asleep and awake.
The voices I hear are not just
mine.
The pleasure of pain inflected
upon one's self.
Pleasure of death would be a
great escape.
Pleasure of sex combine with blood
and pain is just a fantasy.

Don't be scared I could never act
upon my desires.
I'm not that strong.
I know the difference between
RIGHT
and
WRONG.

But could you write your dark
thoughts.
And share them with all,
For all to see.
The darkest side of you,
Are you afraid.

I AM.

I am afraid of me.
My dreams,
My life.
Is becoming nothing.
I fear my reality of the
DARK-SIDE.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN

Copyright © lemmen ... [ 2004-11-23 22:38:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: DARKSIDE REVILED (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:49:17 PM AEST
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*evil grin* welcome to my exsistence brother. It's okay, you learn to accept it.

Re: DARKSIDE REVILED (User Rating: 1 )
by Hollie85 on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 10:55:50 PM AEST
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Whoa! I've read this poem a few times over now and it's sinking in. Like your other poems I have commented on this is very good, extremely honest - which is how poetry should be. I do know who you feel sorta - I've been there 2 as some of my poems show. Be strong

Re: DARKSIDE REVILED (User Rating: 1 )
by darkplaidbabe on Tuesday, 23rd November 2004 @ 11:32:22 PM AEST
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wow. you are an absolutely phenomonol poet!! im speechless.
always with love and devotion
~Brynna~

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