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Array ( [sid] => 72929 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Another Salvation [time] => 2004-11-24 00:26:51 [hometext] => After this I will be posting a two to three part Etalia story in a few days. [bodytext] => Crimson silk once was white
now adorned with rose petals
a place we go late at night
together as one heeding calls
in eternally bound delight
dancing on broken walls.

Cheeks flush as the rose
called upon by poetic prose
loves first kiss, all heaven knows
sometimes all he ever shows
his lover in passions throes.

Unbound by this love
unchained soaring free above
minds lost in this cold
too afraid to be that bold
they only shake their heads
swearing that love will end so bad
instead of following heartly needs
fear is all they've ever had.

Through poignant words an emotion struck
but stuck on readers lips
as they began to hear forgotten chords
and saw for the first time
the obsidian eyes
of the ghost in the mirror
and so mayhap they truly weep
and know IT was not to keep [comments] => 1 [counter] => 216 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Black13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Another Salvation

Contributed by Black13 on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 12:26:51 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Crimson silk once was white
now adorned with rose petals
a place we go late at night
together as one heeding calls
in eternally bound delight
dancing on broken walls.

Cheeks flush as the rose
called upon by poetic prose
loves first kiss, all heaven knows
sometimes all he ever shows
his lover in passions throes.

Unbound by this love
unchained soaring free above
minds lost in this cold
too afraid to be that bold
they only shake their heads
swearing that love will end so bad
instead of following heartly needs
fear is all they've ever had.

Through poignant words an emotion struck
but stuck on readers lips
as they began to hear forgotten chords
and saw for the first time
the obsidian eyes
of the ghost in the mirror
and so mayhap they truly weep
and know IT was not to keep

Copyright © Black13 ... [ 2004-11-24 00:26:51]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Another Salvation (User Rating: 1 )
by nascarfive on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 04:16:13 PM AEST
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I can't say I really understand It. I think I do; but I'm afraid to speak out in my ignorance..I like what I think I know..

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