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The Perfect Allusion
Contributed by
ml02
on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Thorns
Cut
Bleeding palms
Razor blades
Pushing in
Deeper
And deeper
Bloody wrist
Against the white satin
Of her gown.
Bang
Uh
Ah
Oh
Crash
Boom
Glass breaks
Into the skin
The table
Didn't support
The fall
And now she's paying.
Knock
Knock
No answer
Knock
Knock
Dead silence
Knock
Knock
No response
Got alittle scared
And he broke
In the room
Yellin'
For her
Gemini
Gemini
No answer
And he fell speachless
When
He entered in to the bedroom
Of the suite
Saw his little girl
Layin' dead
On the ground
On her
Wedding day.
Blood stained
Wedding dress
And she took
Her own life
Everyone thought
She was so happy
Had the perfect life
But
It was just a lie
One big lie
She hated herself
And got beat
By her future husband
Nearly
Everyday of the week
And it wasn't great
No one could save
The girl
Who wouldn't talk
So
She saved herself
Or so she thinks
But
Will she really like hell
And the devil
Enough
To say
This is better
And he's my savior?
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ml02
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2002-11-23 03:00:00]
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Re: The Perfect Allusion
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 03:51:15 AM AEST
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this poem literally made my eyes swell up.
when i first started reading i was like "oh".. because i generally do not like the one word things, but i must say that after reading this poem, i've begun to change my perception of them. you did a fantastic job.
-sean |
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Re: The Perfect Allusion
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 09:24:00 AM AEST
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| Great poem ... love the ending ... makes you think. |
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