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Ones that no one can answer
She questions existence
Her faith
And who she is
Wonders why no one understands her
Trying to find out who she really is
Why she’s here in the first place
Is she meant to sin?
She has a heart
That’s ripped open everyday
She weeps
Wondering why she feels this way
Why no one understands how she feels
They just want her to snap out of it
But she can’t
It’s a healing process
That never really works
So she puts on a fake smile
Hiding her true self in the dark
Trying not to step into the light
But she always does… [comments] => 6 [counter] => 274 [topic] => 65 [informant] => pyrofungus [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

She Craves Answers

Contributed by pyrofungus on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 10:25:21 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

She craves answers
Ones that no one can answer
She questions existence
Her faith
And who she is
Wonders why no one understands her
Trying to find out who she really is
Why she’s here in the first place
Is she meant to sin?
She has a heart
That’s ripped open everyday
She weeps
Wondering why she feels this way
Why no one understands how she feels
They just want her to snap out of it
But she can’t
It’s a healing process
That never really works
So she puts on a fake smile
Hiding her true self in the dark
Trying not to step into the light
But she always does…

Copyright Â© pyrofungus ... [ 2004-11-24 10:25:21]
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Re: She Craves Answers (User Rating: 1 )
by Gimpie on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 10:53:10 AM AEST
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that was a really good poem...i liked it

Re: She Craves Answers (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 11:31:29 AM AEST
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I feel like this girl,
I felt like i was reading a poem about myself,
Ur not alone, there are many people that
feel this way.

Take care of yourself and if u need a friend send me a message.

Gen xx

Re: She Craves Answers (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 07:16:35 PM AEST
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another fantastic and gripping poem. keep up the great work summer.

Re: She Craves Answers (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrochick on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 05:07:14 PM AEST
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great poem. very sad. but great i liked it alot.

*kat*

Re: She Craves Answers (User Rating: 1 )
by Dominick-Destruction on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:57:41 AM AEST
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Awsome write Huni....
I love your poems ^_^
*kisu*
xDDx..

...Don't worry...one day you will find a use for the pain...

Re: She Craves Answers (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th January 2005 @ 11:21:00 PM AEST
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I can relate to this. True emotion in a gifted write. Cheers!

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