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Array ( [sid] => 73111 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Rape My Mind [time] => 2004-11-25 13:33:14 [hometext] => depression rapes my mind night after night..... [bodytext] => You rape my mind night after night,
I no longer struggle I am too weak to fight,
You scare me more then anything before,
I wince when you hit me & call me a whore.

I beg & plead, ask you to stop your abuse,
But you just laugh & flat out refuse,
I am your puppet; you are the master puppeteer,
I run to hide when I feel you coming near.

But I can not run away as you are in my head,
The only way I can escape is if I were dead,
But I want to live now I have love & a best friend,
But my sanity forever you are trying to bend.

No longer do I cry my tears are long gone,
I just lay there still & let you carry on,
You get your kicks if I struggle & resist,
I just drift away & try to get lost in my mind mist.

All I wish is for you to leave or become bored,
Find a new toy to settle your scores,
I am now just a shadow of a damaged soul,
Yet you continue to burrow in my head like a mole. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 212 [topic] => 32 [informant] => pixie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

You Rape My Mind

Contributed by pixie on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 01:33:14 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

You rape my mind night after night,
I no longer struggle I am too weak to fight,
You scare me more then anything before,
I wince when you hit me & call me a whore.

I beg & plead, ask you to stop your abuse,
But you just laugh & flat out refuse,
I am your puppet; you are the master puppeteer,
I run to hide when I feel you coming near.

But I can not run away as you are in my head,
The only way I can escape is if I were dead,
But I want to live now I have love & a best friend,
But my sanity forever you are trying to bend.

No longer do I cry my tears are long gone,
I just lay there still & let you carry on,
You get your kicks if I struggle & resist,
I just drift away & try to get lost in my mind mist.

All I wish is for you to leave or become bored,
Find a new toy to settle your scores,
I am now just a shadow of a damaged soul,
Yet you continue to burrow in my head like a mole.

Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-11-25 13:33:14]
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Re: You Rape My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by babygurl33 on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 01:47:15 PM AEST
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that is a rele good poem...yu did a wanderful jod!!!!! I feel the same way in a way

xxDestinyxx

Re: You Rape My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 01:49:11 PM AEST
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Very intense and moving piece, an inspiration to all of us to keep on writing.
Your gift was a pen and you use it well !!

Take care

Steve

Re: You Rape My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 02:03:11 PM AEST
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Pixie your such a great poet, your writing skills are beyond my reach. This is really one good poem.

Hugs,
Jane

Re: You Rape My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 06:06:25 PM AEST
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very well done pixie. you expressed your excellent talent of rhymes and rhythym yet again.

Re: You Rape My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:57:19 PM AEST
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Oh..pixie.. dear..these are very sad movements in the life of a girl...hmm..
I wish you peace and happiness..
oooh...big hugs my dear girl..:-) venkat

Re: You Rape My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:52:02 AM AEST
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wo this is so sad.
I really don't know who's doing this to u but I'M SO SORRY U FEEL LIKE THERE'S ONLY ONE WAY OUT.
So sad but writeen wel.
luv, huggs, faith, hope, strength,
emy
I pray u will find courage to get a way from this awefull treatment.

Re: You Rape My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:04:56 AM AEST
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ypu got a lot of emotion in that head girl! good writing.

Johnny.

Re: You Rape My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 10:15:22 AM AEST
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emotional poem. it captured something that
most don't relize.
Keep up the great writing!

-Jen

Re: You Rape My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by ImHearingVoices on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 12:23:32 PM AEST
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WOW this poem is amazing though very sad. This poem brought tear to my eye. Stick in there Pixie very emotional and talented you are.
xXx Lunicor

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