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She lays beside me
She pretends to love me
All I wish for is to die
But it seems i cant cutt deep enough
I wrap my arms around her souless body
I feel her pain
This life is all she knows
You condem her
I use her
I am just as worthless as the man who put her here
I use her to fell loved
For one night she wil be mine
Her false love pointed towards me
I feel her body shake as I touch her
She looks at me with a broken Smile
I just wish I could save her
But i cant even save myself
Bleeding from darkened hollow eyes
Another whore by myside
Thinking to myself today
A perefect day to die
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Broken Smile of a Whore

Contributed by damentedsuicide on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 03:46:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

My scarred love
She lays beside me
She pretends to love me
All I wish for is to die
But it seems i cant cutt deep enough
I wrap my arms around her souless body
I feel her pain
This life is all she knows
You condem her
I use her
I am just as worthless as the man who put her here
I use her to fell loved
For one night she wil be mine
Her false love pointed towards me
I feel her body shake as I touch her
She looks at me with a broken Smile
I just wish I could save her
But i cant even save myself
Bleeding from darkened hollow eyes
Another whore by myside
Thinking to myself today
A perefect day to die

Copyright © damentedsuicide ... [ 2004-11-27 15:46:10]
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Re: Broken Smile of a Whore (User Rating: 1 )
by cuddlytiger17 on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 05:26:44 PM AEST
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You can save yourself, you have to want to
first though. Expressive write, I hope you
realize that death isn't the answer and that
there's hope for everyone. Good luck.
~ann marie~

Re: Broken Smile of a Whore (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 06:33:44 PM AEST
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full of emotion. great job.

Re: Broken Smile of a Whore (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 12:09:18 AM AEST
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I really loved this one. It was so good. Very well written. A very touchy subject... Thanks for sharing. It kind of hit home... I won't explain, but I did really love it!

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